In many countries today respect is shown to older people.
What do you think may be the reasons for this?
What problems might this cause in society?
Nowadays, more and more adults and adolesences do not show respect to elder people. People who retired are considered as not important for our society. It is one of the major topic, which should be consider in our proggresing world.
To begin with reasons which cause that problem. Elderly people are shown in every mass media as people who are not able to be self-reliant and needful for the rest of the society. They are often shown in a hospital or during taking pensions in offices. That is way, teenagers always charge them with taking money, which could develop our country. Moreover, the young generation could not see many amazing retirees' contributions in the past. For that reason, older people are judged by the influence on the present economy.
Therefore, this opinion causes that elderly people are alone, forgotten and often miserable. Teenagers do not have respect to retirees and make fun of them, whereas elderly people are rather deseased and defenceless. Last but not least, this grup of the society is considered as a barrier, which stop developing our country. That is why, the goverment cuts down on pensions.
Everything which was noticed in this text is caused by the upbringing of growing generation. We have an enormous impact on issue which concern the public opinion. If we change our behavior, not only will we be a better society, but also we will simplify lifes' older people. We should thank for the country we inherit after them and be proud of having such citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'considered'?
Suggestion: considered
...one of the major topic, which should be consider in our proggresing world. To begin w...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ce on the present economy. Therefore, this opinion causes that elderly people ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215753424658 0.247107183377 87% => OK
Verbs: 0.181506849315 0.155533422707 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0821917808219 0.0946595960268 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547945205479 0.0501214627716 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0547945205479 0.0437548338989 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102739726027 0.122226691241 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0513698630137 0.0403226058552 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59658190722 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.013698630137 0.0326793684256 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00342465753425 0.00163938923432 209% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0821917808219 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205479452055 0.021408717616 96% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0308219178082 0.011925033212 258% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1518.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 316.048096192 81% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95294117647 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36862745098 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258823529412 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172549019608 0.203846283523 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105882352941 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59658190722 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.037074148 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58431372549 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.8740331062 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.7679736217 49.517814964 46% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2941176471 127.492653851 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7743622355 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 40.8823529412 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.27058823529 1.69124875643 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284926433039 0.332605444948 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0978532382867 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.055957150726 0.0668466124924 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.456398357161 0.534860350844 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0997267203346 0.148594505496 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099690685137 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457058374893 0.0742795772207 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286607546811 0.324371583561 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0619753371347 0.0638462369009 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18483333574 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472735403669 0.058150111329 81% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Rates: 74.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9