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Dear Ahmed,
How are your doing?
I just wanted to draw your attention towards an article that I have found Last night, while I was surfing the internet. This article is about “ The Project Management Modern Techniques ” . Recently, we have been facing a lot of issues during execution of many projects in our company, hence I think applying these principles of the project management become a necessity than ever.
This article spot on a certain organizational sequences during project phases: cost control process , controlling the company resources and stakeholder management . For example, Last week many discussions have arisen around our new project and how to increase our firm profit without any noticeable effect on the quality . Accordingly to my own perspective, the more we follow these rules , the more we can double the company profit .
You can find attached downloadable version of the article. You may want to have a look on it . As I believe that , your department need urgent applying these rules and concepts to avoid any negative consequences in the near future.
I will wait your feedback as soon as possible, Indeed we will set up an internally meeting to discuss all the related aspects of these article and the methods to implement it .
Best regards,
A.G
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2016-05-26 | mohsobhy86 | 84 | view |
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'hence', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.26359832636 0.220444632235 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.133891213389 0.167888034529 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.071129707113 0.0606518309736 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0418410041841 0.0506257000042 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.092050209205 0.118615021944 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0962343096234 0.107062808482 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0376569037657 0.041066498444 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78115317171 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0292887029289 0.0385302599488 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00418410041841 0.00132118243153 317% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.108786610879 0.0714148451538 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209205020921 0.0191574576366 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00418410041841 0.00930345855455 45% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1308.0 1141.60824742 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.134020619 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.9185520362 5.53046319177 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78085437643 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380090497738 0.284621296913 134% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.285067873303 0.211203875043 135% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16742081448 0.133321485273 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113122171946 0.0843313296314 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78115317171 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 63.6004092964 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 12.9587628866 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4166666667 16.4300151701 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2841358687 44.7399317507 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 90.9928171075 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.4300151701 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.613754768223 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 7.22680412371 55% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.923453997 37.5504026743 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.484375 1.13073093955 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336770824339 0.331212695627 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.084230102931 0.0927372745006 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485863370635 0.0736520305886 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572209517408 0.662452444078 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165091094299 0.233577193048 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128005043083 0.122183219658 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757422453662 0.0765303033291 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.247173118583 0.110270004696 224% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0206387634421 0.120535355502 17% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219687762063 0.120397337282 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769824589514 0.113578534861 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.0206185567 124% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 4.54639175258 66% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.0824742268 92% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.62886597938 114% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 8.25773195876 85% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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