: Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compare the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?
Nowadays, Friends are an important part of humans’ life and it is really difficult to find out a great friend. Some people choose friends who are different from themselves, whereas others choose friends who are similar to themselves. I, however, assume that everything has 2 sides so choosing suitable friends is not an exception; both of 2 kinds of friends have the various advantages.
To begin with, having friends who are same to you has much beneficial for you. Firstly, you and your friends are easy to understand each others. When you are suffering from a bad situation, you can tell that story with your friends easier than talking to other people. They sympathy for you and it may make you happier after you relieve your bad feeling. Secondly, you and your friends can share and enjoy the same hobbies. For example, both my friends and I like math so that we can help each other improve our weak skills.
On the other hand, having friends who are different from you is not a bad idea. Firstly, you can learn about different things that you may not know about it before. For instance, I have a friend who totally has unlike character with me. She likes to listen to Korean music and at that time, I just listen to American music. She let me try to listen to some her favorite song, at first, I really do not like that, but gradually, I become an addict at the Korean songs. I think that is a great experience in my life. Secondly, if you have a difficult problem, you can ask your friends, so that they may give many different perspectives. Otherwise, if you ask the friends who have the same character, they may give you an idea that you had thought about it. Thus, your friend with the distinct characteristic can help you see the problem in many diverse opinions.
In conclusion, I believe that people should choose a friend who has the unfamiliar character with you, as a result, you can have more knowledge about new things and you can have more choice to solve your trouble. Although you and your friends may get some quarrels, it can make you and your friends have more understanding about each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ask your friends, so that they may give many different perspectives. Otherwise, if you ask the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'whereas', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.165887850467 0.229887763892 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.151869158879 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0934579439252 0.0866891130778 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0467289719626 0.046263068375 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.13785046729 0.0685040099705 201% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.102803738318 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0140186915888 0.0351676179071 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.44907128081 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280373831776 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00233644859813 0.00188951952338 124% => OK
Determiners: 0.0747663551402 0.0887237588012 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.035046728972 0.0209618222197 167% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018691588785 0.0139019557991 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2123.0 2387.08602151 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58684210526 5.86048508987 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.3 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218421052632 0.251872472559 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.134210526316 0.174417080927 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0921052631579 0.112833075102 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44907128081 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476315789474 0.524397521467 91% => OK
Word variations: 50.4875093377 59.2087087015 85% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7217918953 48.84282405 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.15 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.5533526081 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.95 0.644075263715 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 40.8421052632 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 0.840277777778 1.45489161554 58% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469229061205 0.300154397459 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147561454287 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116379660653 0.0752933317313 155% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.502088583681 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157504812286 0.151897553556 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182611859413 0.114077575197 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162476617525 0.0781384742642 208% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381946940055 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.108554105014 0.067059652881 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345663922591 0.210909579961 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13953844082 0.0618886996521 225% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8870967742 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 16.0 8.42114695341 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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