People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people?
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings pursue those of ways that brings prosperity, joyfulness, and hopeful life. In this regard, music as a well-known factor affects people's creation and innovation and plays a key role in leading them to their ideals and desires. Mankind apart from any characteristic, sex gender, and trend selects the music to getting tranquillity and relief according to his or her personality and traditions socially acceptable in the country, In addition, music has a fundamental importance in novel and modern educational system and makes a great enthusiasm among the children. From social point of view, music is powerful tool in gathering people from different traditions and unites them to the ultimate goal of humanity. The aforementioned reasons are elaborated hereunder.
To begin with, music through creating a sense of tranquillity and comfort environment conducts people's life to the ideal objectives. In the modern world, in which technology with galloping rate has extended into various points of the world, adversely affected human's life and put them in a world with unknown goals. In this condition, people lost their main desires so that the life which is replete with enormous beauties and blessings, is converted to the severe and hardness place and confronts people with huge problems that there is no solution for their solving. However, music revives the principal spirit and creates a sense of hopefulness to follow their objectives with high dynamic.
Secondly, music has been one of the important educational tools in the developed countries and encourage different students to learn with high quality. Undoubtedly, education is a pivotal junction in each society as far as the development and progress is concerned. With this in mind, the governments allocate a great deal of budgets into the extension of state-of-the-art tools in the schools. Obviously, music can enhance and fortify the memory of the students in remembering the tutorial materials. In addition, statistics approve the fact that using music instruments in the educational centers prepares a proper manner for applicants' upbringing and blossoms their talents. Therefore, educational planners can kill two birds with one stone: introducing initiative and creative children to the future life and inviting them to the high quality education, which is less accessible in the old-fashioned facilities.
Last but not least, music is global language and no need to the specific culture and various people from all around the world can increase their common senses in fulfilling the humanity's ideals. Today's world is rife of wars, opposites, and human disaster in the most part of the globe so much so that a person can reach to the undesirable fact that the extinction of humanity is near. However, music communicates with people and collaborates them in one place and invite them to movement toward the peaceful world without any warfare and battle. Accordingly, psychologists intensively suggest that the governments should propagate those of tools in their countries that lead the people to the improved communication so that can strength the relation between them.
To sum up, with all this into account, music can be accounted as a powerful component in the life in order to release people from difficulties and encourage them to construct a world without any dispute. Thus, music has a united mean for all humans that is striving all people to achieve and realization those of ideals that helpful to the human's future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'apart from', 'in addition', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276422764228 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.118699186992 0.158761421928 75% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0943089430894 0.0866891130778 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0308943089431 0.046263068375 67% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0276422764228 0.0685040099705 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136585365854 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0292682926829 0.0351676179071 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90460394823 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0325203252033 0.0309702414327 105% => OK
Particles: 0.00162601626016 0.00188951952338 86% => OK
Determiners: 0.113821138211 0.0887237588012 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0113821138211 0.0209618222197 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00975609756098 0.0139019557991 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3544.0 2387.08602151 148% => OK
No of words: 563.0 408.028673835 138% => OK
Chars per words: 6.29484902309 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87110059796 4.48200974243 109% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.39431616341 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312611012433 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241563055062 0.174417080927 138% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.156305506217 0.112833075102 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90460394823 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515097690941 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 63.576100796 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.8095238095 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5490232313 48.84282405 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.761904762 120.699889404 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8095238095 20.5533526081 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.644075263715 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 58.0706250529 45.7405998639 127% => OK
Elegance: 2.49541284404 1.45489161554 172% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254925776247 0.300154397459 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0936344720009 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0475334818005 0.0752933317313 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.595504818766 0.497263757937 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132231255975 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125503460027 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749383857176 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.510186573749 0.336927656856 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0635539138642 0.067059652881 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208841432984 0.210909579961 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541525691347 0.0618886996521 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 8.42114695341 178% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30