Do you agree or disagree with that statement? It is more important to invest the money of the university in improvement of infrastructural facilities than making faculty satisfy.
University plays an essential role in people's lives. Whether universities use some their budgets to improve their infrastructure and physical plant or for maintaining the faculty satisfied. Some people hold the opinion of using that money for improving their roads, buildings and power supply. Others, on the other hand, disagree. As far as I am concerned, In my opinion, the investment of that money on the improvement of universities organization is much more necessary than the satisfaction of the faculty members. The improvement is the Library, the renovation of the power supply and the increasing the parking lots would be so far playing a crucial role in each university. Following are an explanation of my view.
To begin with the buildings, I believe each library plays an instrumental part of the university's everyday life. In fact, the reputation of the University measured by its library's efficacy. For example, the library;s building needs to be cleaned at least three times daily, also the studying room; computers must be ready and easy to access. Also, the books and research must be up-to-date to allow each student on the campus the access to enormous databases which in turn would raise the educational level of the university.
Secondly, the maintenance of electrical power is another infrastructure part which should be fixed and renovated annually. Students in each class, and in the dormitory rooms need to have a beautiful educational place to encourage them to study and absorb their complicated and hard scholarly knowledge. Otherwise, students would not be happy to review their materials in appropriate circumstances. For example, my friend dropped from her chemistry class last year at the University of Arizona; because the air conditioner did not prepare for six months and the weather there is boiling. For many, the university should put a lot of consideration to keep their student happy and satisfied.
Finally, another valuable infrastructure part of the University is parking lots. Especially, for those areas that lack the subways and any transportation system. Those colleges entirely depend on private cars. For instance, my sister is the West New bridge University, which located in a countryside. She has to drive fifty miles daily to be on the campus. Besides, she struggles every day to find a parking spot. If her University invests some of its money in improving and adding extra parking area, it would be much more helpful for their students and the staff faculty also.
In conclusion, infrastructure, and the University's organization should be number one of the priority when there is any money to invest. In fact, the best buildings, electrical powers, and available parking lots are essential in the happiness of the students and the faculty staff.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Whether universities use some their budgets to improve their infrastructure and physical plant or for maintaining the faculty satisfied.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular or plural is not usually followed by a determiner, possessive
Suggestion: Refer to some and their
Sentence: As far as I am concerned, In my opinion, the investment of that money on the improvement of universities organization is much more necessary than the satisfaction of the faculty members.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to universities and organization
Sentence: Following are an explanation of my view.
Description: The fragment an explanation of is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
my sister is the West New bridge University,
my sister is in the West New bridge University,
flaws:
Need some comparisons, like why not 'making faculty satisfy'?
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Try this pattern:
Para 1: introduction. my choice: A or B. agree or disagree. (suppose we support side A)
Para 2: First, reason 1 (1 sentence) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentences) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences).
Para 3: Second, reason 2, blabla... do the same thing as First
Para 4: Admittedly, there are some advantages of side B. first,....second...However, there is no causation/relation... Still I support side A, ...first,....second...
Para 5: Conclusion.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 452 350
No. of Characters: 2294 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.611 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.075 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.923 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 156 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 133 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 71 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.08 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.333 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.268 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.464 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.097 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
University plays an essential role in pe...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...llowing are an explanation of my view. To begin with the buildings, I believe e...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e educational level of the university. Secondly, the maintenance of electrical ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eep their student happy and satisfied. Finally, another valuable infrastructure...
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Line 4, column 578, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...or their students and the staff faculty also. In conclusion, infrastructure, and th...
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Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'numbed', 'numbered'?
Suggestion: numbed; numbered
... the Universitys organization should be number one of the priority when there is any m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'as to', 'at least', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2741617357 0.229887763892 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.128205128205 0.158761421928 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0670611439842 0.0866891130778 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043392504931 0.046263068375 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0414201183432 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.104536489152 0.118717715034 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0335305719921 0.0351676179071 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00186191715 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295857988166 0.0309702414327 96% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.128205128205 0.0887237588012 144% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177514792899 0.0209618222197 85% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00986193293886 0.0139019557991 71% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2815.0 2387.08602151 118% => OK
No of words: 451.0 408.028673835 111% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24168514412 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356984478936 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310421286031 0.251872472559 123% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.223946784922 0.174417080927 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.168514412417 0.112833075102 149% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00186191715 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534368070953 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 62.6067873786 59.2087087015 106% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.04 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5369302696 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 120.699889404 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.64 0.644075263715 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 49.0821286031 45.7405998639 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.93518518519 1.45489161554 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418155229136 0.300154397459 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0937819867547 0.103427244359 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.076150240984 0.0752933317313 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.491044979883 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185619235026 0.151897553556 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154836677475 0.114077575197 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886607812063 0.0781384742642 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458106140632 0.336927656856 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0447716518871 0.067059652881 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300241940995 0.210909579961 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621565257794 0.0618886996521 100% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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