In the past,when students did a University degree,they tended to study in their own country.
Nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad.
What are the advantages and disadvatages of this development?
You should use your own ideas,knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.
Write at least 250 words.
Generally, education impacts knowledge while it boosts the morale of students. Majority of students are clamoring to possess a University degree in their respective countries in those days but presently the tide has changed. Studying abroad has many benefits as well as disadvantages on the part of the students, families and the country as a whole.
In the first place, international study is known for its academic excellence whereby students undergo thorough practicals by using superbly and modernized equipped laboratories, being taken on field trips.All these assists them in achieving educational goals and giving them greater job opportunities .For instance, Nursing students are using simulated laboratories while those studying Marine Biology are taken on field trips to see and experiment with both plants and animals at the bottom of the sea but compared to their countries where this type of experience is not achievable.
Furthermore, it promotes social interactions among students from different countries because African, Asian, and European cultures differs. International Universities brings together students globally which positively contributes to learning of different cultures and languages. Nigerian students studying in Germany will definitely learn new language as well as the culture.
On the other hand, studying abroad is highly expensive which has negative effect on the family and the country. the exhortation as tuition fee could be beneficial for investment which equally improves the economy of the country.
Conclusively, obtaining a University degree abroad has more greater potentials for securing good jobs and having diverse experiences.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as well as', 'in the first place', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.288389513109 0.247107183377 117% => OK
Verbs: 0.161048689139 0.155533422707 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0898876404494 0.0946595960268 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0711610486891 0.0501214627716 142% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0262172284644 0.0437548338989 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.123595505618 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0749063670412 0.0403226058552 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.00963610571 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0149812734082 0.0326793684256 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0861423220974 0.0861772015684 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00749063670412 0.021408717616 35% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0149812734082 0.011925033212 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1712.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 247.0 316.048096192 78% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.93117408907 6.12580529183 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20517956788 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.485829959514 0.374742101984 130% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.404858299595 0.28420135186 142% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.336032388664 0.203846283523 165% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.19028340081 0.137316102897 139% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00963610571 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.037074148 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651821862348 0.56093040696 116% => OK
Word variations: 73.6420705575 60.7387585426 121% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0891783567 62% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 140.507081672 49.517814964 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.2 127.492653851 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 20.7743622355 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 3.99599198397 350% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.1858299595 49.1944974215 133% => OK
Elegance: 1.88405797101 1.69124875643 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336716570245 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0974369703112 0.102741220458 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597370583211 0.0668466124924 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.690981790407 0.534860350844 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184858297479 0.148594505496 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140827903162 0.134430193775 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057171524034 0.0742795772207 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.160900210463 0.324371583561 50% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.078202436621 0.0638462369009 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189854703054 0.228012699653 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634555654285 0.058150111329 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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