TPO 6- integrated essay
In the given sets of materials, the main topic is the analysis of communal encyclopedias 'context and validity. While the author has emphasized on negative points about this source, the speaker in the follow up audio material raised some uncertainty on those materials by giving examples and justifications.
The first point was mentioned in the article is that communal encyclopedia was developed by unskilled and inexpert people which could not be authentic because of their lack of academic knowledge. However, the speaker stated that there was a little room for doubt that every source had some flaws. Indeed, the most redeeming feature of communal encyclopedia was its online revisions compared to those printed article.
Moreover, according to the essay, online articles have paved the ways for hackers to abuse from the original essence of information while the content of published textbook could not be changed easily. Nonetheless, this was questioned by the lecturer as she discussed not only did some top-notch strategies adopt for this problem but also online connoisseurs and editors have continuously checked the authenticity of materials.
Last but not least, the writer has mentioned that online encyclopedia focused only on trivial topics, while the published one provided a wide range of important fact. On the other hand, according to the professor, the most beneficial advantage of online issues was that they have reflected people's interests instead of focusing on specific topics due to its lack of space.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'encyclopedias'' or 'encyclopedia's'?
Suggestion: encyclopedias'; encyclopedia's
... main topic is the analysis of communal encyclopedias context and validity. While the author ...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oints about this source, the speaker in the follow up audio material raised some uncertain...
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Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... checked the authenticity of materials. Last but not least, the writer has menti...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246153846154 0.261695866417 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.157692307692 0.158904122519 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107692307692 0.0723426182421 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0615384615385 0.0435111971325 141% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0192307692308 0.0277247811725 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.146153846154 0.128828473217 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0653846153846 0.0370669169778 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82297124793 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0192307692308 0.0208969081088 92% => OK
Particles: 0.00384615384615 0.00154638098197 249% => OK
Determiners: 0.123076923077 0.128158765124 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00769230769231 0.0158828679856 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00384615384615 0.0114777025283 34% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1537.0 1645.83664459 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 271.125827815 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.40416666667 6.08160592843 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04852973271 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.420833333333 0.374372842146 112% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.333333333333 0.287516216867 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241666666667 0.187439937562 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1625 0.113142543107 144% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82297124793 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.539623497131 115% => OK
Word variations: 65.7143332704 53.8517498576 122% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0529801325 69% => OK
Sentence length: 26.6666666667 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3721634461 49.3711431718 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.777777778 132.220823453 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 21.7502111507 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.878197800319 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.39072847682 88% => OK
Readability: 60.0 50.5018328374 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.91935483871 1.90840788429 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0100199681922 0.549887131256 2% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123210678844 0.142949733639 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0401391851843 0.0787303798458 51% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.697470127878 0.631733273073 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.101367197028 0.139662658121 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0051550197556 0.266732575781 2% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0145805977053 0.103435571967 14% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327404836926 0.414875509568 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0399987066079 0.0530846634433 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00750374942547 0.40443939384 2% => The content is off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0129968752522 0.0528353158467 25% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.49668874172 57% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.62251655629 138% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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