"Prevention is better than cure." Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.
One of the most controversial issues today relates to health maintenance. I strongly agree that people in this generation should be aware of their wellness and adhering to preventive measures is the primary choice. In this essay, I am going to examine this statement and explain on why prevention is better than cure from my point of view.
On one side of the argument, it is an indisputable fact that a person having a chronic illness may cost a large amount to deal with. Hospital admission bills, laboratory, MRI and CT Scans are few of the expenses a person could undergo once a disease was acquired. I think that the benefits of preventive healthcare considerably outweigh the disadvantages. The main reason for believing this is it does not only obviate the sickness but it can also maintain and increase a person’s well-being. It is also possible to say that the government investing on this programs can increase economy’s growth by cutting off extra subsidies for insurance and extensive researches. One good illustration of this are herbal medicines which are organic and cheap.
On the other side of the argument, it is also possible to make the opposing case. Although it is guaranteed to be too costly, it is often believed that the incessant research can help the people to better understand the pathology of the disease and provide accurate cure in the future. It is often argued in the third world countries whether it is a great investment or not because in fact in the USA they had found answers to cure HIV. A second point is that, not everyone can be compelled by the government to take measures on health. Others can be opinionated and stubborn and most likely would not take chances on exercising and taking herbal medicines. A particularly good example here are the Americans. Most of the population are too busy to comply with the health programs neither are adamant on the value of research and medical technology.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that taking necessary actions to avoid sickness does not only keep you away from the danger of the disease but can also increase your well-being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 554, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...to say that the government investing on this programs can increase economy’s growth ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21144278607 0.247107183377 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.176616915423 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0970149253731 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0621890547264 0.0501214627716 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.044776119403 0.0437548338989 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114427860697 0.122226691241 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0422885572139 0.0403226058552 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8013582208 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0348258706468 0.0326793684256 107% => OK
Particles: 0.00248756218905 0.00163938923432 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.109452736318 0.0861772015684 127% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0248756218905 0.021408717616 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00497512437811 0.011925033212 42% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2198.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 374.0 316.048096192 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.87700534759 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20517956788 105% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352941176471 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280748663102 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20320855615 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125668449198 0.137316102897 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8013582208 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.037074148 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540106951872 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 59.8897368688 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.7777777778 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1099384181 49.517814964 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.111111111 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 20.7743622355 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.611111111111 0.814263465372 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 48.8526440879 49.1944974215 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.29824561404 1.69124875643 77% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257259151239 0.332605444948 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10581614528 0.102741220458 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0866292272184 0.0668466124924 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.518344526508 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151066912003 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104499813205 0.134430193775 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755446157931 0.0742795772207 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.382321738144 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.097383874705 0.0638462369009 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185574638156 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746628681206 0.058150111329 128% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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