“The autonomy of any country is based on the strength of its borders; if the number of illegal immigrants entering a country cannot be checked, both its economy and national identity are endangered. Because illegal immigrants pose such threats, every effort must be made to return them to their country of origin.”
Immigration is the best source in the countries such as United States ,Canada,Australia ;etc. People from other countries immigrate from one country to other country. Immigration means migrating for one country to other country for the purpose of study or for the purpose of job opportunities;etc.
Firstly, I would like to tell about the autonomy of any country means self-governing of oneself. They have to check illegal immigration when entering into the country because for example if we take some people such as terrorists entering into the country and they are killing the people and they want to build fear in the people to enforce they power.
Secondly, If we do not check the person when entering into the country then there may arise different types of issues and they may spoil the countries economy and national identity of a person can also be destroyed by illegal immigration. Endangering of one's own country can be protected by checking every person identity.
Thirdly, Illegal immigrants are responsible for taking one own countries job and they lead to lack of facilities to the citizens of one's own country.Illegal immigrants may settle in the other country and they may also bring their family members and become permanent residents of the country and they may have many opportunities by becoming the permanent residents of the country. Illegal immigrants pose serious threats to the country because they may lead to serious problems.
At last, I would like to elucidate that if the person not responsible for the countries harm or may not lead to country harm they can have the right to live in another country. The country should take every effort to send the person return to their country of origin when they are really harmful to the country. But if we take many efforts too it may I may continue in the country if we do not take strict restrictions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e in the countries such as United States ,Canada,Australia ;etc. People from other...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Australia
... countries such as United States ,Canada,Australia ;etc. People from other countries immig...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... types of issues and they may spoil the countries economy and national identity of a pers...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Illegal
...ies to the citizens of ones own country.Illegal immigrants may settle in the other coun...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.247787610619 0.25644967241 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.147492625369 0.15541462614 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0796460176991 0.0836205057962 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0353982300885 0.0520304965353 68% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0619469026549 0.0272364105082 227% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.126843657817 0.125424944231 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0294985250737 0.0416121511921 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81163000102 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047197640118 0.026700313972 177% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0914454277286 0.113004496875 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0442477876106 0.0255425247493 173% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00884955752212 0.0127820249294 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1882.0 2731.13054187 69% => OK
No of words: 317.0 446.07635468 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93690851735 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350157728707 0.378187486979 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274447949527 0.287650121315 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167192429022 0.208842608468 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11356466877 0.135150697306 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81163000102 2.79052419416 101% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 207.018472906 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432176656151 0.469332199767 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.3470778217 52.1807786196 81% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.039408867 60% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4166666667 23.2022227129 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.2415797053 57.7814097925 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 141.986410481 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 23.2022227129 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.724660767414 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.58251231527 112% => OK
Readability: 53.8614616193 51.9672348444 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.65060240964 1.8405768891 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419580706238 0.441005458295 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.195242083852 0.135418324435 144% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.086303015309 0.0829849096947 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.674505626309 0.58762219726 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170298327201 0.147661913831 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204500275363 0.193483328276 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819602125329 0.0970749176394 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.371485785934 0.42659136922 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0634605780602 0.0774707102158 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291223436076 0.312017818177 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570054278212 0.0698173142475 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.33743842365 36% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 6.46551724138 31% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.82389162562 106% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.