People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example: new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?
People have various purposes from going colleges and universities. Nowadays, it is common way to go to universities. but there are some motivations that cause people prefer to choose this one in the compare of other choices like going to market and begin a career as their job.but what is the people's motivations ?why they want to educate? this is our essay's topic which we want to explain in follow.
Every people want to be the best in the society they live. this sense of being best cause people do different things to find their best way .one of these way to reaching their goal is educating through university and college.
Almost most of the educated people in society have good jobs and as long as that they reach much money which give them a welfare life. Every people want to have welfare life like them.
The other thing is that these educated people in the society have good position. i mean that they are respectable and people respect them more. for example the value of doctors, engineers and professor of university are more respectable than other people that only have money without any personality .
The third one is that most of the people like to get married with educated people because these people earn various experiences during their education times. for example they tough how to live independent and….
With saying all of these things, some people like to educate not for earning much money or being respectable people or can get married well, although they like to increase their knowledge in the field that they are interested in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'for example', 'i mean']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235294117647 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.18339100346 0.158761421928 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0968858131488 0.0866891130778 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0242214532872 0.046263068375 52% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0622837370242 0.0685040099705 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.134948096886 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0415224913495 0.0351676179071 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.355359543 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0484429065744 0.0309702414327 156% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.083044982699 0.0887237588012 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00346020761246 0.0209618222197 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0207612456747 0.0139019557991 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1563.0 2387.08602151 65% => OK
No of words: 271.0 408.028673835 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76752767528 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48200974243 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.30258302583 0.338922669872 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.210332103321 0.251872472559 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.118081180812 0.174417080927 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0774907749077 0.112833075102 69% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.355359543 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509225092251 0.524397521467 97% => OK
Word variations: 49.2516839399 59.2087087015 83% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3571428571 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3782377509 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 120.699889404 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.644075263715 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.3903531892 45.7405998639 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.52564102564 1.45489161554 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156421339337 0.300154397459 52% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132793306533 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0739570138246 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.633086653265 0.497263757937 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.203912731868 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717178860544 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474750204164 0.0781384742642 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.307174733917 0.336927656856 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0600335648217 0.067059652881 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973092113358 0.210909579961 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034253078968 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.6433691756 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.