Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Television advertising directed toward young children(aged two and five) should not be allowed
Nowadays, no one can deny the importance of Television advertising and its influence on young people. These type of advertising not only produced adult people, But also they directed toward young chlidren. Some people may hold the opinion that there is not any problem with advertising for young children, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree to whom think we should not allow them to produce advertising for young children because, obviously, these program can bring about many problems for them. I will try to examine the specific reasons for prohibiting this advertising according to which I think are the most common viewpoints.
First let us look at what young child can typically learn from a television advertising. Children between two and five imitate anything they watch and who are indifferent about advertising for these group of children ,whether they have children or not, surely are not responsible toward future. It goes without saying that, television advertise any staff that have profit for them without any consideration. By way of illustration, any children intrigued by amazing advertisement about choclate while eating many chocalte can cause a lot of problems in the growing them.
There is also a more subtle point we must consider. Watching more and more time television for young children, can bring about many problems. To elucidate on, although children need to spend some time in watching television but if we have many advertising for these children, they allocate their invaluable time for watching television and it is not good for them because they need to play with other chlidren and do any other thing that is necessary for them.
Finally, I cannot oversee the fact that more advertising for young children also means less suitable program for children. To shed more light on the issue, according to the result of the study done in Tehran university if television channels advertise programs about unhealthy foods, they try to make less program about healthy.
Drawing upon the reasons, although there are always some exceptions which are excluded from the general rule, I do agree that these programs should not be allowed. To recapitulate the reasons, not only they can negetive effect on learning process, but also they harm children ability to communicate and their healthy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... advertising for these group of children ,whether they have children or not, surel...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211904761905 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0809523809524 0.0866891130778 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0642857142857 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0690476190476 0.0685040099705 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0404761904762 0.0351676179071 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.70478945393 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0309702414327 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0738095238095 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0285714285714 0.0209618222197 136% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166666666667 0.0139019557991 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2359.0 2387.08602151 99% => OK
No of words: 383.0 408.028673835 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1592689295 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342036553525 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292428198433 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23498694517 0.174417080927 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130548302872 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70478945393 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514360313316 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 56.1366955964 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 23.9375 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4358150837 48.84282405 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.4375 120.699889404 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9375 20.5533526081 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.644075263715 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.1803198433 45.7405998639 116% => OK
Elegance: 1.28571428571 1.45489161554 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248361469845 0.300154397459 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111933366821 0.103427244359 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0815664860637 0.0752933317313 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528353428986 0.497263757937 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153778081319 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945710381235 0.114077575197 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612253305429 0.0781384742642 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.275284558897 0.336927656856 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0359431686249 0.067059652881 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14863244561 0.210909579961 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512272522595 0.0618886996521 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8870967742 34% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.86379928315 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 8.42114695341 36% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.