The following opinion was provided in a letter to the editor of a national aeronautics magazine:
“Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
From the argument the editor is implying that manned space flight should be replaced by unmanned space flights.This argument can be more elaborated by studying the assumptions considered by the editor.
Manned space flight carries set of professional scientist with it to study the behavior of the universe.So firstly,editor is implying that carrying a human being inside the flight can be full of risk because it may lead to loss of life property. Life should be given more priority than all those research works unless one is absolutely sure about the project. Risking one's life means risking the life of their family, any harm caused to the person can affect their family condition too.
Secondly,editor is implying that carrying a person inside a space flight increases the size of the flight which is considered to be uneconomical. Building a big flight takes more labor work,more cost, more inventory,etc all of this increases the cost of the flight. Along with the size the weight of flight also increases because the person will have to stock all the essential things needed for his/her survival in the space i.e, food,oxygen,clothes,etc. All these things can be dominated by building an unmanned space flight . This flight will obviously be small in size,less in weight and most importantly no risk to life of any person. Scientifically it is said that smaller the size of flight less resistance will be provided by the surrounding which will help it to work efficiently.
Thirdly,so how should such a space flight be built? Can all these operations be automated? As of now we have reduced the cost and weight of flight and even loss of life now is the time for the construction of flight. This flight will include an automated driving system which will be controlled by the authorities sitting in the research center. The path taken by the flight will be fixed and a feedback will be given by the automated flight to the center which will confirm that the path is correct. The flight will be having sensors and probes of different kinds which will help to analyze the environment of the universe. Although,a machine can also sometimes go through some technical problem but all those issues are dominated by all the advantageous provided by it.
In summary editor is implying that if an unmanned flight is being so effective and efficient than a manned flight which is risk free , cost efficient,fully automated,etc then why to risk a person's life. It is not that human's interference is not there, all the activities of the automated flight is under the brisking eye of the authorities in research center. Hence, this century is of automation and more prominent developments!
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244 0.25644967241 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.182 0.15541462614 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.064 0.0836205057962 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048 0.0520304965353 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.018 0.0272364105082 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126 0.125424944231 100% => OK
Participles: 0.072 0.0416121511921 173% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94675233479 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.026700313972 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.128 0.113004496875 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.042 0.0255425247493 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.016 0.0127820249294 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2695.0 2731.13054187 99% => OK
No of words: 452.0 446.07635468 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96238938053 6.12365571057 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.57801047555 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356194690265 0.378187486979 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243362831858 0.287650121315 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183628318584 0.208842608468 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12389380531 0.135150697306 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94675233479 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 207.018472906 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444690265487 0.469332199767 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.1165391206 52.1807786196 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6362271501 57.7814097925 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.75 141.986410481 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 23.2022227129 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.724660767414 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 3.58251231527 586% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.9362831858 51.9672348444 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.78225806452 1.8405768891 97% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458913703037 0.441005458295 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126785877296 0.135418324435 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.111542500349 0.0829849096947 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.560391472101 0.58762219726 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.198299073958 0.147661913831 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19665123098 0.193483328276 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109244308166 0.0970749176394 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.456825451038 0.42659136922 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.1317074414 0.0774707102158 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335534351302 0.312017818177 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424269647505 0.0698173142475 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.33743842365 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.87684729064 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.82512315271 187% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 6.46551724138 46% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 5.36822660099 75% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 14.657635468 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.