Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business.
On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'in other words', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.248691099476 0.247107183377 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.149214659686 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107329842932 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0314136125654 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0314136125654 0.0437548338989 72% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141361256545 0.122226691241 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0575916230366 0.0403226058552 143% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82588024418 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287958115183 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0890052356021 0.0861772015684 103% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183246073298 0.021408717616 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157068062827 0.011925033212 132% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2051.0 1933.35771543 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 316.048096192 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89367816092 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35632183908 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.26724137931 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212643678161 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.140804597701 0.137316102897 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82588024418 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474137931034 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.7609878931 60.7387585426 80% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.7743622355 140% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7303137398 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.916666667 127.492653851 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7743622355 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 0.814263465372 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 55.724137931 49.1944974215 113% => OK
Elegance: 2.11111111111 1.69124875643 125% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448560606559 0.332605444948 135% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155798656276 0.102741220458 152% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0496206944601 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.674348293058 0.534860350844 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0926055576646 0.148594505496 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215533065501 0.134430193775 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749515194359 0.0742795772207 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354544830212 0.324371583561 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0540086030417 0.0638462369009 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302032832938 0.228012699653 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656014403893 0.058150111329 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.