Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying for your future generation?
I agree that there is a difference in the way of life I live and the way in which in my parents have been living and I definitely would want my future generation to live life the way my parents are living because I feel it's more satisfying. There are several reasons for this. The first reason why i would want my future generation to follow the steps of their grandparents is that they have respected money and never wasted it. My parents used to save money from their monthly salaries for future use. Not only this, they also use to keep some money aside for electricity or gas bills, to be paid to the servant etc. On the other hand people from my generation never used to keep money aside and use to spend recklessly and because of that they have to lend money from other people or from the banks. This is the reason why i would want my future generation to learn to save money and respect money because change is the law of nature and situations can change any time and can take you off guard. One moment you are rich and the very next moment you loose all your money.
Another quality to be learnt is time management. The people of my generation especially me lack skills of managing time. Because of that we encounter various problems like work projects and presentations are not completed on time and to cover up for that we take extra time out our life and then forget to give time to our family. Improper time management also leads to stress which in turn leads to various health problems. In contrast, my predecessors that is my parents were never late for work or work related projects and everything was managed well. They used to spend time with their family everyday and thus never had any health issues and la happy and healthy life.
Thus, in conclusion i would prefer my parents way of living life for my future generation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.254189944134 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.175977653631 0.158761421928 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0586592178771 0.0866891130778 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0502793296089 0.046263068375 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0949720670391 0.0685040099705 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0977653631285 0.118717715034 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0307262569832 0.0351676179071 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31002646618 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0502793296089 0.0309702414327 162% => OK
Particles: 0.00837988826816 0.00188951952338 443% => OK
Determiners: 0.0642458100559 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0167597765363 0.0209618222197 80% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0139664804469 0.0139019557991 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1852.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 339.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46312684366 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.256637168142 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.159292035398 0.251872472559 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.094395280236 0.174417080927 54% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0737463126844 0.112833075102 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31002646618 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47197640118 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.0607259168 59.2087087015 81% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8887858173 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.466666667 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.5533526081 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.733333333333 0.644075263715 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 38.5292035398 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.19130434783 1.45489161554 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286552350324 0.300154397459 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.115928139476 0.103427244359 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0788679670618 0.0752933317313 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50324838543 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207453565248 0.151897553556 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112855952421 0.114077575197 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812740599699 0.0781384742642 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290118441087 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.129926942393 0.067059652881 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237138237766 0.210909579961 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505744195861 0.0618886996521 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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