TPO26-INTEGRATED
In this set of materials, the reading states that the invation of zebra mussel cannot be stopped and they have real danger for freshwater fish in all of North America and brings up three different hyptheses to explain the undangerousness of zebra mussel. However, the lecture finds all the ideas incorrect and he believes there are some way to control zebra mussels and in it is possible if we use effective ways and he provides some evidence to support his claim.
First of all, the author of the passage claims that the zebra mussels attach theirslf to ship's bottom and use ballast water to migrate to North America. In contrast, the lecture argues that people can empty the ballast water out of the ocean when they arrive to the beach rather then pour them in the ocean.
Furthermore, it is mentioned in the reading passage that they can confront against any difficulties in the new habitats and become dominat because they have good reproduction and there is no predators to kill zebra mussels. On the contrary, the lecture contends that the zebra mussel has not any predators only in the begining, but the habitat changes over time and some animals eat zebra mussels now.
Finally, the author is of the opinion that the zebra mussel causes the decrease in the number of fishs because they eat fish's foods. Conversly, the lecture explains that the zebra mussels have negative effect only on some fishes, but they have positive influence on other fishes which nutrient from the traces of the zebra mussels.
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Essay evaluation report
there are some way to control
there are some ways to control
Sentence: Conversly, the lecture explains that the zebra mussels have negative effect only on some fishes, but they have positive influence on other fishes which nutrient from the traces of the zebra mussels.
Description: The fragment which nutrient from is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace nutrient with verb
Sentence: In this set of materials, the reading states that the invation of zebra mussel cannot be stopped and they have real danger for freshwater fish in all of North America and brings up three different hyptheses to explain the undangerousness of zebra mussel.
Error: undangerousness Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: invation Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: hyptheses Suggestion: hypotheses
Sentence: First of all, the author of the passage claims that the zebra mussels attach theirslf to ship's bottom and use ballast water to migrate to North America.
Error: theirslf Suggestion: theirs
Sentence: Furthermore, it is mentioned in the reading passage that they can confront against any difficulties in the new habitats and become dominat because they have good reproduction and there is no predators to kill zebra mussels.
Error: dominat Suggestion: dominate
Sentence: On the contrary, the lecture contends that the zebra mussel has not any predators only in the begining, but the habitat changes over time and some animals eat zebra mussels now.
Error: begining Suggestion: beginning
flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 23 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 260 250
No. of Characters: 1231 1200
No. of Different Words: 138 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.016 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.735 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.303 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 32.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.809 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.476 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.742 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.177 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 280, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...an when they arrive to the beach rather then pour them in the ocean. Furthermore,...
^^^^
Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no predators'?
Suggestion: there are no predators
...because they have good reproduction and there is no predators to kill zebra mussels. On the contrary,...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'in contrast', 'first of all', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275985663082 0.261695866417 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.143369175627 0.158904122519 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0537634408602 0.0723426182421 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0430107526882 0.0435111971325 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0465949820789 0.0277247811725 168% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132616487455 0.128828473217 103% => OK
Participles: 0.00716845878136 0.0370669169778 19% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.37308315671 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0286738351254 0.0208969081088 137% => OK
Particles: 0.00358422939068 0.00154638098197 232% => OK
Determiners: 0.136200716846 0.128158765124 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010752688172 0.0158828679856 68% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00716845878136 0.0114777025283 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1517.0 1645.83664459 92% => OK
No of words: 260.0 271.125827815 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83461538462 6.08160592843 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.04852973271 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353846153846 0.374372842146 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257692307692 0.287516216867 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142307692308 0.187439937562 76% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0692307692308 0.113142543107 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37308315671 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542307692308 0.539623497131 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.2632375996 53.8517498576 99% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0529801325 61% => OK
Sentence length: 32.5 21.7502111507 149% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5257624843 49.3711431718 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.625 132.220823453 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 21.7502111507 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 0.878197800319 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.39072847682 59% => OK
Readability: 58.2692307692 50.5018328374 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.78461538462 1.90840788429 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.706979099641 0.549887131256 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.213692062112 0.142949733639 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0456325613076 0.0787303798458 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.781837681634 0.631733273073 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0429342479219 0.139662658121 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.421805112935 0.266732575781 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786141057317 0.103435571967 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.481679552457 0.414875509568 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0387369769715 0.0530846634433 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.52980119539 0.40443939384 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439695785097 0.0528353158467 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.49668874172 86% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.1766004415 63% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 10.2958057395 78% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.