In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
It is evident how life has changed since technology has been introduced in the human life. When we think about technology mostly the first thing that comes to our mind is the image of a computer. Technological advancements such as computers have been designed and created with the only purpose to help humans and make their lives easier. Computers have become indispensable in any workplace where they are basically considered a compliment for people to help them on developing their activities. In fact, computers are the greatest invention of all time because they have multi-tasking features that can minimize your work, they can display and let you manipulate stored information, and they are used in almost all fields for any purpose.
First of all computers have multi-tasking features that can minimize the work you have to do. For example, computers avoid you having to calculate any result on doing math, the only thing you must do is to type the information needed and your work is done.
Secondly, computers can display and let you manipulate stored information. In other words, you don’t need to use paper in order to store any information on shelves. You don’t even have to rewrite a whole paper because you did a mistake or you have to add more information to the written form. You can have as many files as you can in your computer and organize them the way you like it without having to use any extra material or space.
Finally, computers are used in almost all fields for any purpose such as entertainment, education, and any type of job. For example, you can use computers to play videogames, watch movies, listen to music or chat on the internet for entertainment. In education or any job you can use them for videoconferences, PowerPoint presentations or just using their basic features discussed in the first point.
Therefore computers are the greatest invention of all time because they reduce your time consumption on your activities, you can save your information and edit it anytime, and they let you do almost everything you need. Computers have become the most powerful tool ever created.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... has been introduced in the human life. When we think about technology mostly the fi...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...formation needed and your work is done. Secondly, computers can display and let ...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...atures discussed in the first point. Therefore computers are the greatest invention of...
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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223618090452 0.247107183377 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.208542713568 0.155533422707 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0527638190955 0.0946595960268 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035175879397 0.0501214627716 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.100502512563 0.0437548338989 230% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0979899497487 0.122226691241 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0552763819095 0.0403226058552 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86492517547 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.035175879397 0.0326793684256 108% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0778894472362 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0251256281407 0.021408717616 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150753768844 0.011925033212 126% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2141.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 358.0 316.048096192 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.98044692737 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304469273743 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245810055866 0.28420135186 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201117318436 0.203846283523 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145251396648 0.137316102897 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86492517547 2.80594681477 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474860335196 0.56093040696 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.3153948177 60.7387585426 81% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.375 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6128593449 49.517814964 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.8125 127.492653851 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6875 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 46.9560055866 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.09489051095 1.69124875643 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334790154288 0.332605444948 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.1620724457 0.102741220458 158% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109625956069 0.0668466124924 164% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.57047903257 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163295549567 0.148594505496 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147098859784 0.134430193775 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434163487757 0.0742795772207 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.32376080036 0.324371583561 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100575117646 0.0638462369009 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226472445009 0.228012699653 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378189578679 0.058150111329 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.