The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
After reading the statement, the very first question that prompts in my mind is , what make an ordinary person, a leader? One, who has the potential to guide others, and making them follow him avidly. Yes, it is justify to say that leadership is a two way process, and in order to become a better leader, one must encourage people to present their views for the work done by their leader so that eventually that leader could take cerebral judgements. For that purpose people need to heed the words of their leader in order to provide him a genuine feedback, to make his leadership qualities salubrious.
To answer the above aforementioned question, that what makes an individual a leader, let's take an example of a widely known personality, Mahatma Gandhi, also known as the father of the nation in India. He was remarkable in his work to lead people, who not only belong to his community, but across. He was the one who coalesce the entire nation against the British rule single handed. He always encouraged people not only to listen to him and follow his orders, but he also use to take advice from his people, he used to lead, what is necessary in order to make their revolution better, and they eventually became successful in their agenda. There are many more examples of such leaders around the world, who made their people believe that they can achieve something they wished for, if they agreed to follow that particular person.
Moreover, what makes a leader best, the answer to this question is lie inside that person only, who wants to lead. No one is responsible for his doings, but he himself. Others, the ones who a person lead, are just their to bolster his intentions by giving some feedback based on his qualities. To count someone's positive and negative points doesn't make him/her a best leader, but it certainly make them better than before. Hence, there is a subtle boundary amidst a good leader and a best one. People, sometimes, consider themselves best among all, but unfortunately their thoughts can leave them in a lurch, in case they don't know what to do in a certain situation. Take a case of Saddam Hussain, the one who consider himself the best leader of all times, but never let his people to talk when it comes to suggestions. He was one of the dogmatic leaders of all times, and results into a havoc not only for his people, but the entire nation he used to lead, or rather say, used to rule.
Overall though, leadership is not an innate quality, but it is something which comes with experiences in life. Amalgam of some good and bad experiences can do their job to make a leader, good, along with the contribution of the thoughts and feedback of the people he lead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'justified'.
Suggestion: justified
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...against the British rule single handed. He always encouraged people not only to li...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... him and follow his orders, but he also use to take advice from his people, he used...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'uses'.
Suggestion: uses
... him and follow his orders, but he also use to take advice from his people, he used...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t someones positive and negative points doesnt make him/her a best leader, but it cert...
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Suggestion: the
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'leads'.
Suggestion: leads
... thoughts and feedback of the people he lead.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'moreover', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.199630314233 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.153419593346 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0720887245841 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0499075785582 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0887245841035 0.0444667217837 200% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.090573012939 0.12292977631 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0147874306839 0.0406280797675 36% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.47053381405 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0480591497227 0.030933414821 155% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0998151571165 0.0997080785238 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00924214417745 0.0249443105267 37% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0277264325323 0.0148568991511 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2709.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 480.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64375 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329166666667 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.216666666667 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.122916666667 0.200843997647 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0791666666667 0.132149295362 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47053381405 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 219.290929204 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489583333333 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 56.3988346306 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 25.2631578947 23.380412469 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0552480006 59.4972553346 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.578947368 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2631578947 23.380412469 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.9298245614 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.04430379747 1.64882698954 63% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35709617416 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104646229551 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0776420864347 0.077325440228 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49255593286 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.145100034816 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148022641812 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651634015057 0.0892212321368 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.477341613853 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0863361441018 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27310089792 0.275328986314 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221016624885 0.0653680567796 34% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.