Do you agree or disagree that people should work on relaxing with hobbies or physical exercises than continue to do same work as in workplace. Support with reasons.
In today’s world, which is growing at a very fast rate, people have no time to spare and relax a bit. Because of the increased competitiveness, even the smallest amount of free time is utilized in thinking about work. All this has greatly affected the lives of people. Hence, in my opinion, people should indulge themselves in some sort of relaxation activities like hobbies or physical exercises. I feel this way for two very important reasons which will be further explained in the essay.
Firstly, physical exercise always acts as a stress buster. All the work load and pressure can be easily vented out by doing some form of exercise. For instance, I always go for a run after coming from job and this has helped me improve my health in various ways. To begin with, all my stress just gets removed and I start feeling more relaxed. Furthermore, running in a park around those green trees also allows fresh intake of oxygen, which is not available in the chaotic city because of increased traffic. And therefore, this a very easy and efficient way for one to relax.
Secondly, performing hobbies is also a great way to release stress. This way, people get to think in a different direction apart from their job. This transition is very helpful as people feel and enjoy what they do. For example, my mother always goes to an NGO to play with the kids and feed them. The smile on the faces of those children brings a smile on my mother’s face and all her worries just disappear as if they never existed.
In conclusion, people should work on relaxing themselves and the best way of doing that is either perform some hobby or physical exercise. This will help them to counter the negative impact of the work pressure and stress and will prove beneficial for them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'apart from', 'for example', 'for instance', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'sort of', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.209039548023 0.229887763892 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.155367231638 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0762711864407 0.0866891130778 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0593220338983 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0508474576271 0.0685040099705 74% => OK
Prepositions: 0.127118644068 0.118717715034 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0423728813559 0.0351676179071 120% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51031210287 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0225988700565 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00282485875706 0.00188951952338 150% => OK
Determiners: 0.110169491525 0.0887237588012 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0169491525424 0.0209618222197 81% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0112994350282 0.0139019557991 81% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1787.0 2387.08602151 75% => OK
No of words: 313.0 408.028673835 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70926517572 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.319488817891 0.338922669872 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223642172524 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.14696485623 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0862619808307 0.112833075102 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51031210287 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 65.6228789687 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3888888889 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.617944975 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2777777778 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 39.7531061413 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.42553191489 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201318640442 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0664772984005 0.103427244359 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0444908829456 0.0752933317313 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.445732792282 0.497263757937 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.110864233893 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727353477879 0.114077575197 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575351053148 0.0781384742642 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.320586265279 0.336927656856 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0160341078211 0.067059652881 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140522539468 0.210909579961 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340886892846 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.