Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in order to do a project.
Throughout history, human beings has perpetually been concerned about how to use other people`s help for conducting their researches. Such a constant effort has become even more noticeable in the modern era where other people`s opinions always pave students` way to conduct the ground breaking studies. In this regard, there has been a long standing controversy among academicians as to whether it is better for colleagues or classmates to communicate in person than through emails in other to do projects. I personally believe that communicating with emails is more beneficial for students. In what follows, I will elaborate on my view point.
The most prominent reason to be mentioned here is that communicating with emails provides an opportunity for students to save their time and money. If students wants to see each other face to face for each time which they want to discuss some think about their projects, they should spend lots of time and moreover they should pay lots of money for their transportation. For instance, if I want to go to my university every day, I should spend more than 100 dollars each weak. This is huge amount of money which I cannot afford it at all.
The other important reason crossing my mind now is that if students use their emails, they can communicate with each other whenever and wherever they like. Undoubtedly, nowadays, universities students come from different parts of countries or even different parts of the world. As a result, the best way for communicating with our classmates, especially during the vacations, is utilizing emails. To illustrate, I would like to mention some available statistics about this point. The result of the study conducted recently in my country clearly depicts that more that 69 percent of students leave the cities which they are studying in it at least 2 times in each semester. So, it is highly recommended to students to use their electronic devise for communicating with each other.
The last but not the least reason by which claim is justified is that when students utilize electronic mails to communicate with each other they can ask something from their classmates which they do not like to speak about it when they see each other face to face. Take a personal experience as an example. Last year I promised to one of my friends to help him for conducting his experiments. But, I found that I did not have enough time to help him. Because it was were hard for me to speak about this to him, I send a mail to him and explained my situation for him. Moreover, sometimes we could not underlines our friends` problems face to face, so, we can write about their problems and send an email for them.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely reach the conclusion that it is better fo students to utilize their emails, if they want to communicate with each other because it helps them to save their time and money and communicate with each other from different locations. All in all, it is anticipated that in future people will pay more heed to use different electronic services for communicating with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 397, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
...standing controversy among academicians as to whether it is better for colleagues or classmat...
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Line 4, column 466, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...enough time to help him. Because it was were hard for me to speak about this to him,...
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Line 4, column 601, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'underline'
Suggestion: underline
...r him. Moreover, sometimes we could not underlines our friends' problems face to face...
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Line 4, column 695, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
..., we can write about their problems and send an email for them. From what has been discussed...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'as to', 'at least', 'for instance', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.1875 0.261695866417 72% => OK
Verbs: 0.172297297297 0.158904122519 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0726351351351 0.0723426182421 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0456081081081 0.0435111971325 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0996621621622 0.0277247811725 359% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136824324324 0.128828473217 106% => OK
Participles: 0.035472972973 0.0370669169778 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.81142375656 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0506756756757 0.0208969081088 243% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0726351351351 0.128158765124 57% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0202702702703 0.0158828679856 128% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0202702702703 0.0114777025283 177% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3124.0 1645.83664459 190% => OK
No of words: 532.0 271.125827815 196% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87218045113 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80261649409 4.04852973271 119% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298872180451 0.374372842146 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229323308271 0.287516216867 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.18984962406 0.187439937562 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137218045113 0.113142543107 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81142375656 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 145.348785872 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.539623497131 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.803664936 53.8517498576 104% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 13.0529801325 176% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1304347826 21.7502111507 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6522036113 49.3711431718 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.826086957 132.220823453 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1304347826 21.7502111507 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.391304347826 0.878197800319 45% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 46.0627656097 50.5018328374 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.1329787234 1.90840788429 59% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366461756055 0.549887131256 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0924254759971 0.142949733639 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0877046182745 0.0787303798458 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.475006792654 0.631733273073 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171060617421 0.139662658121 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128468899038 0.266732575781 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10034706791 0.103435571967 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.335174824213 0.414875509568 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0509350288925 0.0530846634433 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252916652294 0.40443939384 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732918895711 0.0528353158467 139% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 4.33554083885 323% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.26048565121 94% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.49668874172 229% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.62251655629 83% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.1766004415 31% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.2958057395 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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