Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue of whether extended family is still of the same importance as it once was, many people claim that it still possesses a great significance. However, others disagree and state that extended family no longer plays an crucial in one's life. Personally, I believe that the latter belief is more accurate.
First and foremost, members of extended family nowadays often live after away from one another. In the past, people of a large family tend to live close to each other; hence, they are more likely to bond have shared interests. On the contrary, family members today are bound to settle in different places, as a result, they do have as much time bonding as before. Take my mother's family as an example, when she was young, her family used to be very huge as all her uncles and aunts lived in the same area. But as she grew up, she and her cousins went to different places to study and live; hence they are no longer as close as they used to be. Distance has made the importance of extended family degraded for all family member.
Secondly, the development of economy has also played down the importance of a large family. Before, most people were not wealthy, as a result, it is crucial that the family is big enough so that the members can support each other. Nevertheless, today people are more independent financially, so there is no need for them to live in such large family. For example, my cousin used to live in a crowded family along with many of his relatives so that the families can support one another; however, when his family earned enough money, they moved to different place to start their own business. The growth of economy has surely influenced to importance of extended family as members are now more independent.
In conclusion, multiple factors are to contribute to the degradation of extended family's significance namely the distance and economical development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203753351206 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.155495978552 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101876675603 0.0866891130778 118% => OK
Adverbs: 0.083109919571 0.046263068375 180% => OK
Pronouns: 0.058981233244 0.0685040099705 86% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117962466488 0.118717715034 99% => OK
Participles: 0.029490616622 0.0351676179071 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5440345421 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0428954423592 0.0309702414327 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00536193029491 0.00188951952338 284% => OK
Determiners: 0.0804289544236 0.0887237588012 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00536193029491 0.0209618222197 26% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0107238605898 0.0139019557991 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1917.0 2387.08602151 80% => OK
No of words: 333.0 408.028673835 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.75675675676 5.86048508987 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345345345345 0.338922669872 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.225225225225 0.251872472559 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147147147147 0.174417080927 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0870870870871 0.112833075102 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5440345421 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516516516517 0.524397521467 98% => OK
Word variations: 53.9147120086 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5569010431 48.84282405 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.8 120.699889404 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.644075263715 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 44.7225225225 45.7405998639 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.18018018018 1.45489161554 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330647261147 0.300154397459 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123555297713 0.103427244359 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0942550069474 0.0752933317313 125% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543873550259 0.497263757937 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.168469093646 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142763876852 0.114077575197 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432994571767 0.0781384742642 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.331618377383 0.336927656856 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0937552171547 0.067059652881 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241404584747 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109898536739 0.0618886996521 18% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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