Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
This topic raises a very controversial issue of whether, demands create leaders or not. Indisputably, it is possible that the demands might create leaders. But, it is not necessary that every time it is true. Thus, I would disagree with the author and would like to argue that it is not necessary that only demands creates leaders. This fact can be exemplified by many examples evident in the past.
Firstly, it is not necessary that only the demands placed on people creates leaders. To illustrate this let us take an example of Maharana Pratap of Chittodgarh. He was surely a leader of the Marathas and people loved him. Though, he lost the war with Akbar, the Mughal leader. But, people of the Chittodgarh loved him and therefore, they gave him everything for fulfilling the needs of the battle. Thus, this sites an excellent example that leaders might not be created by the demands that are placed on them. Instead, this might be a quality developed with time.
Secondly, there might be some people that are good leaders but there are no demands placed on them during their time. Though due to their intelligence and their expertise in the affairs makes them good leaders. For example, Akbar, the Mughal leader, is very highly praised for the works that he carried out as Mughal leader. He is remembered as one of the most kindest leaders of India. Albeit, no demands were placed on him during his time. But, he emerged to be a great leader and during his reign the Mughal Empire flourished the best.
Admittedly, there are some leaders who are born because of the demands that must be fulfilled. Leaders like, Chatrapati Shivaji, Leader of the Marathas, was one brave leader. During, the times when the Mughal Empire was establishing hegemony on the Marathas, he guided the Maratha Empire which showed growth under his leadership. Hence, there are examples of the leaders that are formed by the demands inculcated on them. But, it is not necessary for all the leaders.
To sum up, the contention of the author is indefensible. As it contrary to the overwhelming evidence that to be the leader it is not necessary that demands must be placed on him. As it is presumed that Leaders are born, not made. Thus, as long as some measurements are performed, or some cases are involved the conclusion that it is not necessary that the leaders are created by the demands being placed on them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'kindest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: kindest
... leader. He is remembered as one of the most kindest leaders of India. Albeit, no demands we...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the kindest'.
Suggestion: most the kindest
... leader. He is remembered as one of the most kindest leaders of India. Albeit, no demands we...
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Line 5, column 58, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntention of the author is indefensible. As it contrary to the overwhelming evidenc...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'it is true', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.197452229299 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.180467091295 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0424628450106 0.0880659088768 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0573248407643 0.0497285424764 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0743099787686 0.0444667217837 167% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.127388535032 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.0509554140127 0.0406280797675 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52835738914 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148619957537 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00424628450106 0.0016655270985 255% => OK
Determiners: 0.108280254777 0.0997080785238 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191082802548 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0148619957537 0.0148568991511 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2392.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 415.0 452.878318584 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76385542169 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342168674699 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240963855422 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13734939759 0.200843997647 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0867469879518 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52835738914 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424096385542 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.3119489965 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6194690265 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3703703704 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6584148303 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5925925926 141.124799967 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3703703704 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.481481481481 0.674092028746 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 39.4667559125 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.20408163265 1.64882698954 73% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389819627562 0.391690518653 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128736564004 0.123202303941 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0938634929193 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489280119515 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.136359421621 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150385787487 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779223635285 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.479210890928 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0480633737578 0.0692045440612 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282342800437 0.275328986314 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477813135844 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.