The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner.
"Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels
Central plaza store owner makes a generalized conclusion that increase in populations of stake boarder and higher incidence of vandalism and litter has negative effect on numbers of shopping in the central plaza. And also states that skateboarding should be prohibited around central plaza to increase the business in this area. There are many fallacy in this assumption, author only considers the store owner view as a complete arguments, hence the even if given premise is valid but incomplete and assumptions is unwarranted therefore conclusions is not convincing.
Author states that over the past two years the number of shoppers in central plaza has been steadily decreasing. But authors unable to provides the reason that how skateboarding users affects in their business. Although this may be due to the presence of nicer shopping place then central plaza. Central plaza may be more costly to compensate their loss due to decrease in their shopping from past two years.
Peoples around the central plaza may not have enough money to buy their product in the central plaza sue to money problems. In the above arguments authors should considers different factors that hinder the business in this area. So the authors must heed on the different measures which had direct effect on business at this area. Authors had states that business in the central plaza was decreased due to vandalism and litter, this is narrow view, only concerned in the close subject matter. So authors should find more persuading reason for decreasing the business in this area. Lack of police stations might be the another reason for decreasing the shopping, which authors does not states in the arguments. The writer could use the stronger evidences through chart, survey, and other observations instead of only limited to store owner. The behaviors of store owners might also determine the shopping in central plaza.
In summary, Arguments has a several weak point that authors had only concerned with the narrow subject matters. Skateboarding and vandalism may not only be the reason for decreasing the business in the central plaza there may be other factors like high price, lack of police stations, developments of more nicer shopping facility then central plaza, behaviors of central plaza owners and social status of peoples around central plaza. If author have includes this topic then only the conclusion will be convincing. He also must hav to study through survey, observations,graphs etc to know why the business is decreasing. Although given premise is valid but incomplete and assumptions is unwarranted so further study is need to provide convincing conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 340, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun fallacy seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fallacies'.
Suggestion: many fallacies
...se the business in this area. There are many fallacy in this assumption, author only conside...
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Line 1, column 345, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'fallacies'?
Suggestion: fallacies
...e business in this area. There are many fallacy in this assumption, author only conside...
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Line 1, column 430, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'argument'?
Suggestion: argument
...ders the store owner view as a complete arguments, hence the even if given premise is val...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arding users affects in their business. Although this may be due to the presence of nice...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
.... In the above arguments authors should considers different factors that hinder the busin...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plaza was decreased due to vandalism and litter, this is narrow view, only concer...
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Line 5, column 605, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss in this area. Lack of police stations might be the another reason for decreasi...
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Line 5, column 687, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...ng the shopping, which authors does not states in the arguments. The writer could use ...
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Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arrow subject matters. Skateboarding and vandalism may not only be the reason for...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'nicer' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: nicer
...ack of police stations, developments of more nicer shopping facility then central plaza, b...
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Line 7, column 437, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...status of peoples around central plaza. If author have includes this topic then on...
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Line 7, column 572, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , graphs
...av to study through survey, observations,graphs etc to know why the business is decreas...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'in summary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284164859002 0.25644967241 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.145336225597 0.15541462614 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.119305856833 0.0836205057962 143% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477223427332 0.0520304965353 92% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0108459869848 0.0272364105082 40% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125813449024 0.125424944231 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0390455531453 0.0416121511921 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69933932049 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0260303687636 0.026700313972 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0911062906725 0.113004496875 81% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0303687635575 0.0255425247493 119% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130151843818 0.0127820249294 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2670.0 2731.13054187 98% => OK
No of words: 427.0 446.07635468 96% => OK
Chars per words: 6.25292740047 6.12365571057 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.409836065574 0.378187486979 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304449648712 0.287650121315 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.196721311475 0.208842608468 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126463700234 0.135150697306 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69933932049 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 207.018472906 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435597189696 0.469332199767 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.1066955953 52.1807786196 90% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.039408867 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.35 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2380578682 57.7814097925 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.5 141.986410481 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.35 23.2022227129 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.724660767414 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 3.58251231527 335% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.7949648712 51.9672348444 100% => OK
Elegance: 2.20212765957 1.8405768891 120% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.55009013422 0.441005458295 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133659793285 0.135418324435 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0888497702486 0.0829849096947 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524085164313 0.58762219726 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111166762981 0.147661913831 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.23551140391 0.193483328276 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135901864738 0.0970749176394 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469436766994 0.42659136922 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0925242219799 0.0774707102158 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.422689311609 0.312017818177 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540788036648 0.0698173142475 77% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.82512315271 104% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 6.46551724138 108% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.82389162562 177% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 14.657635468 130% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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