You saw an advertisement for a skiing course in Canada but you have one or two problems and can’t stay for the whole course.
Write a letter to the course director. In your letter
• explain your interest in the course
• describe your problems
• find out if a refund is possible
Dear course Director,
Good day to you. My name is Mohammed Aslam. I am from India. I completed my bachelor degree in Anna University. I noticed your advertisement in New England news paper. I am very enthusiastic by heard that news, that you are going to conduct a skiing course in canada. I am very much interested to join in that course.
But unfortunately, I have a problem which I could not able to attend the complete course. Actually, Here my degree semester exam is going to start on 1st March 2017. I looked around the possible way to skip the semester exam. But I can't. It is very important exam which I should not missed it.
Even though I don't want to miss this wonderful opportunity which I never got in my life. I am ready to pay my full fees, but is there any possibility to refund the money for the non-attended course.
I am looking for your valuable and splendid reply from you.
Thanking you.
Yours truly,
Aslam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my bachelor degree in Anna University. I noticed your advertisement in New Engla...
^
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...ticed your advertisement in New England news paper. I am very enthusiastic by heard that n...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dvertisement in New England news paper. I am very enthusiastic by heard that news...
^
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g to conduct a skiing course in canada. I am very much interested to join in that...
^
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...le way to skip the semester exam. But I cant. It is very important exam which I shou...
^^^^
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'miss'
Suggestion: miss
... very important exam which I should not missed it. Even though I dont want to miss ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t exam which I should not missed it. Even though I dont want to miss this wonderful oppo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... should not missed it. Even though I dont want to miss this wonderful opportunity...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212435233161 0.220444632235 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.165803108808 0.167888034529 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673575129534 0.0606518309736 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0673575129534 0.0506257000042 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.139896373057 0.118615021944 118% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0725388601036 0.107062808482 68% => OK
Participles: 0.020725388601 0.041066498444 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63747228342 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0466321243523 0.0385302599488 121% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0518134715026 0.0714148451538 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0103626943005 0.0191574576366 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.020725388601 0.00930345855455 223% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 944.0 1141.60824742 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.134020619 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52046783626 5.53046319177 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.27485380117 0.284621296913 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181286549708 0.211203875043 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12865497076 0.133321485273 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0760233918129 0.0843313296314 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63747228342 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.622163163488 102% => OK
Word variations: 61.2419114445 62.8969750728 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 12.9587628866 131% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0588235294 16.4300151701 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8185980376 44.7399317507 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.5294117647 90.9928171075 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.0588235294 16.4300151701 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.613754768223 48% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.09278350515 382% => OK
Readability: 28.1874785002 37.5504026743 75% => OK
Elegance: 0.819444444444 1.13073093955 72% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342452272272 0.331212695627 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0772570562093 0.0927372745006 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0999154064805 0.0736520305886 136% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501248771793 0.579516596996 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.248024709601 0.180689518051 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101212371253 0.122183219658 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799606900645 0.0765303033291 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.125214052789 0.211926503985 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0808098268728 0.0737400523855 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192606880109 0.203819188451 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358133398056 0.067151250289 53% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.45360824742 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.0206185567 199% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 1.03092783505 97% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.56701030928 156% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.