Government officials should rely on their own judgment rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people they serve.
The author of the issue contends that whether the government officials should depend on their own judgment or rely on the people's wills. There is a conflict between the people's attitudes toward this issue. I generally agree with the claim that the leaders' decisions should align with the people's requirement. Among the countless reasons which support my outlook, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones in what follows.
First of all, one should take into the account this significant point that the primary duty of the leaders is the serving the people led by themselves. As the people vote someone to be their leader and govern them, that government should present the function for the sake of the people's well-beings and demands. As far as the leader does not address the people's needs, his or her attempt is abortive and useless. A vivid example can be given to shed light on the issue is my country's leader's instance. Our president has been elected by citizens of my homeland. Before the election, he promised to handle whole problems and presents the welfare for entire dwellers in the Iran. People voted this candidate among the list of the other nominees due to the fact that he covers more requirements of the people than others. In this condition, if he does not deal his promised duties and change his duration to his judges, he will lose his current popularity among the people.
Another equally striking point justifying my point is that the best option is based on the multiple consults rather than sole incomplete choice. Besides, as long as the government does not have the holistic understanding toward the surrounding, the consult with the people gains the necessity. This consultation should not consider as the communicating with one by one citizen; however, it could be the agreement between the minor groups of people's lawyers and the leader. As these agents convey the people's demands, the leader opts the best option. According to the noteworthy, intelligence survey conducted in my country, approximately seventy-five percent of the successful leadership, with which the majority of the people is on welfare, is for the sake of the awareness of the government about the individuals' needs.
Nevertheless, as far as the reason is concerned, I do not agree with the author in some extents. Although the aim of governing is preparing the alleviate condition for the people, the leaders have a proliferate knowledge about this issue. In some situation, this information leads them to make some decision which does not cover the people's ongoing demands, since it has a long-term outcome. In this case, the people's current minor needs can be overlooked till the ultimate massive result demonstrates its benefits.
To wrap it up, all aforementioned reasons lead to the conclusion that although the leaders' have advanced knowledge and make some long-term program which does not cover the people needs, they should consider the people's requirement since the serve for them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...leaders decisions should align with the peoples requirement. Among the countless reason...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.25 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.142592592593 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0611111111111 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.037037037037 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0555555555556 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133333333333 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71513035223 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0166666666667 0.030933414821 54% => OK
Particles: 0.00185185185185 0.0016655270985 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.161111111111 0.0997080785238 162% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0203703703704 0.0249443105267 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111111111111 0.0148568991511 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3030.0 2732.02544248 111% => OK
No of words: 494.0 452.878318584 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13360323887 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71445763274 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380566801619 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.295546558704 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198380566802 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.119433198381 0.132149295362 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71513035223 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 219.290929204 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.5490868877 55.4138127331 106% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4545454545 23.380412469 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4009518515 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 23.380412469 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.674092028746 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.009201325 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.74803149606 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.431460747654 0.391690518653 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103065488598 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0628953680447 0.077325440228 81% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.606411326877 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171167388522 0.149214159877 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183266274035 0.161403998019 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106360003065 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.595465172805 0.385218514788 155% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0789804587627 0.0692045440612 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302897987552 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738506366461 0.0653680567796 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.