Educational institutes have a responsibility to dissuade students for pursuing field of study in which they are not likely to succeed.Do you agree or disagree?
Educational is the most important in the world.The educational institutes are responsibility to improve their life.Education improve a man think logically.through out the globe educational institutes are more.So, I agree with that educational institutes have a responsibility to dissuade students for pursuing field of study in which they are not likely to succeed.
Some important topics are agree with the students life.The students are teenage people but,They do not responsibility so,The institutes are mainly responsibility of their students life.The students do not fallow the some rules in the institutes they guided lectures and teachers.The institutes have a main responsibility to dissuade students.
The educational institutes are mainly responsibility of there students life because I agree with that statement.The students are prefer there own field of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.The family's are not support in their own field of study because they are young age they do not choose there specific field of study.Especially,The Indians are fallow there only studies.They do not their own field of study to dissuade students.
The institutes have a responsibility of their choose fields of study better ideas of their pursuing field.the students do not thinking about their life and goals.The family members are responsibility of their students in which field choose their dissuade students.These are mainly concepts and ideas of their dissuade students of their pursuing field.
Thus educational institutes should dissuade a student from continuing in the field in which they are likely to not succeed but provide various opportunities and platform of growth.So that they realize their potential themselves and learn to become better individuals and citizens.
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- Educational institutes have a responsibility to dissuade students for pursuing field of study in which they are not likely to succeed.Do you agree or disagree? 56
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.257142857143 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.185714285714 0.155533422707 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107142857143 0.0946595960268 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0607142857143 0.0501214627716 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0821428571429 0.0437548338989 188% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.117857142857 0.122226691241 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0107142857143 0.0403226058552 27% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.34803392199 2.80594681477 119% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.0326793684256 87% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0714285714286 0.0861772015684 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00357142857143 0.021408717616 17% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0142857142857 0.011925033212 120% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1805.0 1933.35771543 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.73507462687 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414179104478 0.374742101984 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.332089552239 0.28420135186 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.279850746269 0.203846283523 137% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.167910447761 0.137316102897 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34803392199 2.80594681477 119% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 176.037074148 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.388059701493 0.56093040696 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.7453242407 60.7387585426 59% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0891783567 31% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 53.6 20.7743622355 258% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9114630886 49.517814964 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 361.0 127.492653851 283% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6 20.7743622355 258% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 3.99599198397 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 86.8089552239 49.1944974215 176% => OK
Elegance: 1.17391304348 1.69124875643 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.530318616647 0.332605444948 159% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.383507534681 0.102741220458 373% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798889529499 0.0668466124924 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 1.0 0.534860350844 187% => Sentence paragraph similarity is high.
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 1.9860273226e-16 0.148594505496 0% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.375261101517 0.134430193775 279% => Sentence topic similarity is too high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942169208571 0.0742795772207 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.435805791465 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0996618431137 0.0638462369009 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375261101517 0.228012699653 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942169208571 0.058150111329 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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