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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
Throughout energy history, nuclear becomes very important for folk’s life. Nuclear is a semi-unlimited energy source which is inexpensive, and without polluting earth. As a weapon, super-power country uses nuclear for primarily armament to protect world peace. However, there are many contradictions behind using this complex energy source and detrimental munition.
Several nations which have nuclear technology believe that nuclear provides vastness energy sour...
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Sentence: As a weapon, super-power country uses nuclear for primarily armament to protect world peace.
Suggestion: As a weapon, super-power country uses nuclear primarily for armament to protect world peace.
Sentence: In conclusion, although the using of nuclear is a debatable issue, nuclear, as weapon and energy source, have some advantages which useful for world-wide live.
Description: The fragment which useful for is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace useful with adverb
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 343 350
No. of Characters: 1940 1500
No. of Different Words: 195 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.304 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.656 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.839 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 134 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 55 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.224 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.574 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
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