Choose oneof the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives.
a) automobiles
b) bicycles
c) airplanes
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Transpotation is important for us as human being. Transportation is changed world wide and we have different methods of transportation nowadays in world. I agree with bicycle as a convenient method of transportation because of the following reasons.
First of all, it is more convenient for all kinds of people even poor people can buy a bike in order to commute. We need the method of transportation to buy whatever we need from distant places and bring it home. For example, we bought so much groceries, so many fruits we need to move them to home in orther to consume.
Moreover, we need this to go to work for instance. When your work is one hour away from your home it will take an hour to walk if you do not drive a bike. For example, when I drive bike to my workplace it will save half an hour of my time.
Furthermore, bike will help people's fitness. It helps people's shape so we don't have any obese people in community anymore. Obesity is one of the most important problems that human being is having. People dye from diabetes, High blood lipid, Heart attack, High blood pressure because they don't exercise.
Nowadays motor vehicle is too popular. In order to reduce it in community we recommend people take a bike instead of motor vehicle. Nowadays traffic is so heavy that we recommend people to escape from this traffic by riding a bike.
In summary, I believe that bike is the most efficacious mode of transportation in comparison with automobile and airplane.
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Essay evaluation report
it is more convenient for all kinds of people even poor people can buy a bike in order to commute.
it is more convenient for all kinds of people even poor people who can buy a bike in order to commute.
so much groceries,
so many groceries,
so many fruits we need to move them to home in orther to consume.
we need to move so many fruits to home in order to consume.
Sentence: For example, we bought so much groceries, so many fruits we need to move them to home in orther to consume.
Error: orther Suggestion: order
flaws:
No. of Words: 263 while No. of Different Words: 141
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1183 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.498 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.683 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 57 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 22 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.471 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.248 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.327 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.624 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.2 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... human being. Transportation is changed world wide and we have different methods of transp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... human being. Transportation is changed world wide and we have different methods of transp...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...ring it home. For example, we bought so much groceries, so many fruits we need to m...
^^^^
Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le, we bought so much groceries, so many fruits we need to move them to home in o...
^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s fitness. It helps peoples shape so we dont have any obese people in community anym...
^^^^
Line 7, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ttack, High blood pressure because they dont exercise. Nowadays motor vehicle is ...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in summary', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263888888889 0.229887763892 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0590277777778 0.0866891130778 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0555555555556 0.046263068375 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0902777777778 0.0685040099705 132% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.135416666667 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0173611111111 0.0351676179071 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75774783977 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0381944444444 0.0309702414327 123% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0520833333333 0.0887237588012 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0138888888889 0.0209618222197 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0104166666667 0.0139019557991 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1488.0 2387.08602151 62% => OK
No of words: 261.0 408.028673835 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70114942529 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.48200974243 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.295019157088 0.338922669872 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.226053639847 0.251872472559 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164750957854 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.112833075102 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75774783977 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528735632184 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 51.3205750396 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3529411765 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.416666194 48.84282405 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5294117647 120.699889404 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.644075263715 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.54480286738 108% => OK
Readability: 37.9583051611 45.7405998639 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161783981166 0.300154397459 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.134378458566 0.103427244359 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0985112405633 0.0752933317313 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.56269663352 0.497263757937 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167952696963 0.151897553556 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586108542037 0.114077575197 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408550365162 0.0781384742642 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.193417782777 0.336927656856 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0656998254447 0.067059652881 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936200226684 0.210909579961 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303059029211 0.0618886996521 49% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.