You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
These days, more and more people are making the choice to go to university. While some people are of the opinion that the only purpose of a university education is to improve job prospects, others think that society and the individual benefit in much broader ways.
It is certainly true that one of the main aims of university is to secure a better job. The majority of people want to improve their future career prospects and attending university is one of the best ways to do this as it increases a person's marketable skills and attractiveness to potential employers. In addition, further education is very expensive for many people, so most would not consider it if it would not provide them with a more secure future and a higher standard of living. Thus job prospects are very important.
However, there are other benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, the independence of living away from home is a benefit because it helps the students develop better social skills and improve as a person. A case in point is that many students will have to leave their families, live in halls of residence and meet new friends. As a result, their maturity and confidence will grow enabling them to live more fulfilling lives. Secondly, society will gain from the contribution that the graduates can make to the economy. We are living in a very competitive world, so countries need educated people in order to compete and prosper.
Therefore, I believe that although a main aim of university education is to get the best job, there are clearly further benefits. If we continue to promote and encourage university attendance, it will lead to a better future for individuals and society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...he best ways to do this as it increases a persons marketable skills and attractiveness to...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'in addition', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242038216561 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.15923566879 0.116061578633 137% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0955414012739 0.0759168565197 126% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0445859872611 0.0366838410393 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445859872611 0.0131127313244 340% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12101910828 0.155750635184 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0191082802548 0.0379272487307 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75550943654 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0445859872611 0.0210936926555 211% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0891719745223 0.0948980150116 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0222929936306 0.00437022459523 510% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1689.0 1161.00487805 145% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.9 146% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8850174216 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73763899035 110% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365853658537 0.337110787985 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282229965157 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.198606271777 0.171178102325 116% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.135888501742 0.112407865282 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75550943654 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 106.607317073 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526132404181 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.6538955752 49.3433353143 107% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 8.93414634146 157% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.555512098 42.9750493124 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.642857143 135.714022679 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 0.689975730869 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 48.7229965157 47.7609492067 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 2.94281807926 52% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326748411298 0.418131533498 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110528642933 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0887948363121 0.0850326197045 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.523929445972 0.706616315825 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166389504687 0.157042692854 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139558066735 0.228904883108 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972964281322 0.108899403657 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378909434598 0.367819155151 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0398412029452 0.0812612215331 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253084664961 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584804371134 0.0921553760075 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 3.70731707317 351% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 3.16585365854 284% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.