Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get
better jobs. Others believe that there are much wider benefits of university
education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your
opinion
To start with, it is a well-known fact that high level of education is one of the most popular subjects of debate. Some people think that University degree is the only way to get a better job, but there is also an opinion, that with good knowledge students will get much more benefits in personal life and in society. Let us discuss these two opinions.
On the one hand, it is absolutely true, that people with a diploma of some good University, have much bigger chance to get a better job and become a successful person. For example, the largest companies in the world like Shell or Apple are looking for young employees with high level of technical or legal education. What is more, if you finish Harvard, Stanford or Oxford University, you will be a hundred percent secured with a good job at those best global companies.
On the other hand, there are other benefits of postgraduate level. Firstly, that living away from home and parents independently, students life is a very good opportunity to learn how to coexist in our society, which are very important skills. For example, I used to be a student of the university for 5 years, all that time I was far away from my family, but it was the best experience in my life. What is more, I have learned how to solve a lot of specific problems or conflicts with other humans.
In conclusion, I would like to say, that of course, people with university education have more opportunities to get a better job and make more money, but there are more advantages in university knowledge as it can be seen above.
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development? 78
- It is better for boys and girls to study separately rather than study in mixed sexclasses. They are less distracted and this leads to better results.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 73
- Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. Itwould be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in moretraditional pastimes than spending all day indoors.Do you agree or disagree with this statement? 56
- The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks? 73
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'of course', 'to start with', 'what is more', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230031948882 0.247107183377 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.134185303514 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.115015974441 0.0946595960268 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038338658147 0.0501214627716 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0447284345048 0.0437548338989 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137380191693 0.122226691241 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0159744408946 0.0403226058552 40% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.62092978906 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287539936102 0.0326793684256 88% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0766773162939 0.0861772015684 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0127795527157 0.021408717616 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159744408946 0.011925033212 134% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1564.0 1933.35771543 81% => OK
No of words: 280.0 316.048096192 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58571428571 6.12580529183 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.285714285714 0.374742101984 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221428571429 0.28420135186 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157142857143 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.137316102897 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62092978906 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.037074148 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539285714286 0.56093040696 96% => OK
Word variations: 54.1861473128 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0891783567 68% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4545454545 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1351457559 49.517814964 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.181818182 127.492653851 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.7743622355 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 0.814263465372 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 47.5974025974 49.1944974215 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.76470588235 1.69124875643 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310964872245 0.332605444948 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0639226148563 0.102741220458 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0581427997646 0.0668466124924 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547875832041 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196355838257 0.148594505496 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13514585484 0.134430193775 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632088852614 0.0742795772207 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302049630002 0.324371583561 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0476339556326 0.0638462369009 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219610285667 0.228012699653 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455848888957 0.058150111329 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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