Claim: The best way to understand the character of a Society is to examine the character of the men and women that Society as its hero's or its role models
Hero's and role models play pivotal role in Society by influencing the masses. Role models are characterized by qualities like struggle, passion, humanity and patience. Men and women of this Society when follows this model, results into betterment of humanity and to world. Each and every person has a role model in his or her life which leads them to ending up being philanthropic.
Hero's and role models symbolises their hard core struggle and patience to achieve for what they are paradigm now. Though the are some hero's which influences people for riots and wars. Atmost Care should be taken while selecting one's idol. For example, a role model exploring humanity, Charity and good will. Young generation of today will have greater impact in their minds, which will lead towards increase in salutary to world. A novice when taught about humanity and charity, it will turn him to be a role model for some other masses as follower of humanity. This will eventually spread importance of humanity and world will live in peace.
Each person choose their hero from television, books, in the army,in history, in cartoons,in government or any religious figures. Hero's inspire, lead and entertain the Society. Each person dreams of achieving something big in his life. Motivation is the thing which drives confidence in them to achieve dreams and desires. Motivation from hero's and idols plays paramount factor in shapping individual's life. For example, fathers are role models in many children's life. If child lacks positive role model for his future,he seeks a fatherly figure to mentor him, whether they have ability to mentor or not. Children always compares fathers to superman and aspire to be one of them. If children accepts their parents to be flawless, they will strive to become as their parents. In the near future, this will only lead to betterment of Society.
Each idol or model has definitely gone through struggle which they embellish and serves motivation to others.This idol never backed down, when their motives was questioned, because they all knew what they were doing was right. This motivation shows how important is hero to Society. This struggle is motivational element not only in minds of youth but also for adults. For example, a youth who failed in exam boards can take inspiration from Bill gates who said " I failed in some subjects in exams,but My Friend passed in all, now he is engineer in Microsoft and I am the owner of Microsoft". This inspiration by idol will motivate him and may create one more founder of leading industry. This will bring statutory to Society as well.
Because hero's represents good will, humanity, struggle and motivation, following by men and women of society will thrive for enhancement of society. Every individual of society if motivated for love Care and humanity, no war will take place in any Society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.292817679558 0.240241500013 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.151012891344 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0423572744015 0.0880659088768 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0294659300184 0.0497285424764 59% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0497237569061 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121546961326 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0294659300184 0.0406280797675 73% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57644540737 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294659300184 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.00184162062615 0.0016655270985 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0644567219153 0.0997080785238 65% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0294659300184 0.0249443105267 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02394106814 0.0148568991511 161% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2882.0 2732.02544248 105% => OK
No of words: 478.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 6.02928870293 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.353556485356 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257322175732 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194560669456 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115062761506 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57644540737 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529288702929 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 62.8627503199 55.4138127331 113% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.4827586207 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1289340629 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3793103448 141.124799967 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4827586207 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.275862068966 0.674092028746 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.2149761939 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.928 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304087576441 0.391690518653 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0992338410058 0.123202303941 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665959076648 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.439292945945 0.547984918172 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14089618845 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108887809481 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067948094467 0.0892212321368 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352067865085 0.385218514788 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0596205881159 0.0692045440612 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214890251117 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509766987046 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.4325221239 192% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.