Some people believe it is imperative for individuals living in developed nations to reduce their energy consumption and lead a more sustainable lifestyle, given the evidence for global climate change. Others believe that such drastic lifestyle changes are

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...fficult to reduce energy consumption as many day to day needs has become dependent on th...
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...eeds has become dependent on the energy.Thus it seems very difficult to reduce the e...
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...ficult to reduce the energy consumption.Moreover, there many other reason which will pro...
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...uch drastic change are unwraranted. Thus , i am completely in acceptances with it....
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...nt upon the enery for the welfare of it.From small pin to that of the ginatic,everyt...
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...reduce the invention of the new machine.The reduction in the energy may thus reduce...
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... thus reduce the progress of the nation.Thus many new problem maybe faced due to thi...
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...any new problem maybe faced due to this.Thus enery consumption is one of the basic n...
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...is.Thus enery consumption is one of the basic necessities for carrying out daily needs and to sto...
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... such changes can unwarranted as it may effect the global climate.Thus the change mayb...
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...ted as it may effect the global climate.Thus the change maybe harmful. In the develo...
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...ficult to reduce the energy consumption.Similary, many household activites are dependent...
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...them will may result into many problems.As in the developed nation, invention and...
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...vention and reasearch are ver important.Thus with invention and research,the energy ...
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...gress of the nation. After all life has many option,we take some and abandon some.Thus to t...
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...ny option,we take some and abandon some.Thus to take risk is just imperative.
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...ny option,we take some and abandon some.Thus to take risk is just imperative.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'thus', 'after all', 'for example', 'first of all']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234666666667 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.136 0.157235817809 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122666666667 0.0880659088768 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.056 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0346666666667 0.0444667217837 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125333333333 0.12292977631 102% => OK
Participles: 0.00533333333333 0.0406280797675 13% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.19885263624 2.79330140395 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373333333333 0.030933414821 121% => OK
Particles: 0.00266666666667 0.0016655270985 160% => OK
Determiners: 0.122666666667 0.0997080785238 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0346666666667 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00266666666667 0.0148568991511 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2144.0 2732.02544248 78% => OK
No of words: 349.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.14326647564 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355300859599 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255014326648 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.21776504298 0.200843997647 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.180515759312 0.132149295362 137% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19885263624 2.79330140395 115% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464183381089 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5358016222 55.4138127331 86% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 38.7777777778 23.380412469 166% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.785405122 59.4972553346 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 238.222222222 141.124799967 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.7777777778 23.380412469 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.674092028746 247% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.21349557522 652% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 64.2792104425 51.4728631049 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.61176470588 1.64882698954 98% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325521498911 0.391690518653 83% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.219330371586 0.123202303941 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.1378912327 0.077325440228 178% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748011531517 0.547984918172 137% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.240093233167 0.149214159877 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194628471972 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364739445694 0.0892212321368 41% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.499799041956 0.385218514788 130% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0648503749406 0.0692045440612 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238821032136 0.275328986314 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264522101701 0.0653680567796 40% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.