Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Leaders are the torch bearers of the society. Their actions have a direct impact on people. Leaders often find themselves in a quandary, whether to go with the general opinion or follow their self beliefs. It is sensible enough to assert, that a leader should pay heed to the public demands in order to accomplish his professional goals. However, it is equally important to stick to one's own ideas or principles in many situations. Unlike a leader, common people might not have a broader perspective to look things at.
Mahatma Gandhi is a fine example to counteract the author's statement. Mr. Gandhi was quite clear in his thoughts and he had an unshakable faith in this ideology. Initially, he was widely criticized for employing non violent ways to fight against the British rule and set India free from the clutches of slavery. He sternly condemned violent ways, which most of the people resorted to in the freedom struggle. Over a period of time, he became successful in changing the mindset of common public, and with the help of non violence as well as non co-operation brought an end to the 200 year old British era in India.
Coming to the world of technology, Steve Jobs is a classic example of the successful leaders who went against the general opinion and proved his mettle. Mr Jobs was a man of his own ideas. He did not compromise on his beliefs, while contributing to the development of Macintosh computers. Other employees as well as the stake holders were skeptical about his approach, but it worked wonders for Apple and helped the company gain world wide status.
Conversely, leaders should not display rigidity without considering the pros and cons of the public opinion. Let me exemplify this point by taking the topic of gay marriages in America. Until 2015, there was no movement to legalize same sex unions. Considering a rising demand to protect the rights of homosexuals, Mr Obama paused and revisited the issue. He was resilient enough to understand the concerns of people, and finally gay marriages got legalized.
To recapitulate, it is a leader's responsibility to work for the betterment of the people. If a leader thinks that the situation does not ask for the comprise of his ideas, he should not budge. At the same time, a leader should deeply analyze what public wants, and must work diligently to fulfill the genuine requirements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: authors'; author's
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Suggestion: worldwide
...s for Apple and helped the company gain world wide status. Conversely, leaders should n...
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Suggestion: worldwide
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.251121076233 0.240241500013 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.14798206278 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0919282511211 0.0880659088768 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0470852017937 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0493273542601 0.0444667217837 111% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114349775785 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0224215246637 0.0406280797675 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72310866509 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.042600896861 0.030933414821 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.107623318386 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0134529147982 0.0249443105267 54% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0067264573991 0.0148568991511 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2375.0 2732.02544248 87% => OK
No of words: 404.0 452.878318584 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87871287129 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388613861386 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.279702970297 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158415841584 0.200843997647 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.113861386139 0.132149295362 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72310866509 2.79330140395 97% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 219.290929204 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586633663366 0.48968727796 120% => OK
Word variations: 70.487260084 55.4138127331 127% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6194690265 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5652173913 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.018341865 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.260869565 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5652173913 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.434782608696 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 45.535514421 51.4728631049 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.5871559633 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3344665681 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0857759209477 0.123202303941 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0577758902305 0.077325440228 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503419022516 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14274119515 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124637806584 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604344566212 0.0892212321368 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.362801032896 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0398918259924 0.0692045440612 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226600211283 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034460493512 0.0653680567796 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.