Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Three basics necessity of human beings are food,clothing and shelter.Besides,these three if you are not educated you might eat wrong things like high calories stuff. If one is not educated he might not know when to wear what type of cloth as well as one might do not know where to take shelter to earn one's bread and butter. Education is paramount parameter in every individuals life.
Society of today judge mostly by degree of education that person holds and communicate according to it. Thus its a necessity to gain education and one of the prime source of education is High schools and university. High grade schools and universty are confined with formal studies and education which is restricted to that particular subject and field. One cannnot skip these confined rules of education. In short people with great minds may not be in capacity to seek knowledge rather they might be in position to discover something new. These discovery can be a new invention. For example,Newton, eintstein this great researchers gained knowledge by practically inventing things not by just confined knowledge.
Formal education though gives a individual a honorable degree in relevant subjects but fail to inculcate individuals learning and discovering principles. In any case,a person with good practical knowledge is always prefarable by a company rather than a bookworm. If every individual is not given chance to concoct new things, how new inventions can be developed? A normal individual get admission in a university to seek knowledge but fails to invent new things. Formal education give knowledgable studies and degree but do not boost individual's desire to be a researcher of new things. For example, a normal ranking student who always score an average in every year in university, have interest more in new ideas and innovation rather just getting a numeric figure in a report card. Infact if these particular individual given a fare chance to explore his ides and innovations,by keeping his attendance and score marks aside, University may blessed with another Einstein.
Every new ideas and invention takes years and years of research.Every individual when start something to invent, it take many attempts. However some people may get lucky to gets desired results in first attempt but not every individual gets result in first attempt. Formal education confine individuals most of time in attending lectures and giving examinations. If these tantamout time is replace by time given to indivdual to practise there discoveries,it will not only bolster confidence of individual but also capability to make every other attempt. University should have some alteration in formal education.It may includes allowing individual to undergo industrial training or allowing that individual to participate in competition.
Thus on one hand formal education gives knowledge but on other hand it takes away individuals space to think about new inventions and discoveries. To conclude if every university includes official individual training or any other forms which will bring individual to explore there inventions, then these university will have salutatory from inventions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, in short, as well as, in any case
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2693.0 2235.4752809 120% => OK
No of words: 501.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.375249501 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01834555985 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506986027944 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5121511188 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.208333333 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.70833333333 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119287073421 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372072562093 0.0831039109588 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033333430622 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717286888851 0.150359130593 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276880035248 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 12.1743820225 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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