tpo48
Tpo48
Many frog species have declined around the world. These animals help protecting ecosystems. There are several ways to solve this problem. But according scientists experiment ,each methods have problem to be practical. The methods are pesticides, fungus, threatening.
Pesticides often use by farmers on lands. They are harmful for frogs nervous system. Law can help to protect frogs from chemicals. according to experiments it is so expensive, so farmers don’t want to do that ,because economically it is bad for them.
A fungus makes the skin thick. And because frogs absorb water from their skin, it will kill them by dehydration. Also there are several ways to prevent infection, such as antifungal medication and killing the fungus with heat. These treatments are helpful if applied on a large scale. The problem with this method is it should do individually for each frog and it is difficult and impossible.
Third factor is threatening frogs natural habitants. Most frogs lay their eggs in water. Human activities such as draining wetlands threat with their habits. If lakes was protected from developments, many frogs would recover. Nowadays difficult situation like global warming and using water make some problems for animals surviving and it needs much effort to solve this problem.
To sum up, frogs are useful for our ecosystems so we must protect them from death. If these methods don’t help us, our researchers should think about other new methods that help us to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to protect' or 'protect'.
Suggestion: to protect; protect
...ed around the world. These animals help protecting ecosystems. There are several ways to s...
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Line 2, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...lem. But according scientists experiment ,each methods have problem to be practica...
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Line 3, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: According
...n help to protect frogs from chemicals. according to experiments it is so expensive, so f...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e, so farmers don't want to do that ,because economically it is bad for them....
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...skin, it will kill them by dehydration. Also there are several ways to prevent infec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, third, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24180327869 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67957263637 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => Sentence length is too short
Sentence length SD: 33.8765264987 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.9047619048 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.619047619 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.09523809524 5.45110844103 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.032291076377 0.236089414692 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0123665711067 0.076458572812 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553049872862 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 58.1214874552 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.93 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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