All over the world, socities are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affacts both children and adults. What are the reaons for this in obesity? How could it be tackled?
A generation ago, the number of people who were overweight or obese was far lower. Having an active lifestyle or eating a balanced diet were the main causes. However, now the situation turned into the opposite. obesity is facing around the world day by day. This essay will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.
One of the main cause of the problem is that people watch tv for long hours. They spend too much time on tv which is not that crucial in our daily life. Because of watching tv more than two hours a day, they are becoming more apathetic and lazier. Additionally, eating while watching tv causes a person to eat more which in turn leads obesity. To tackle this issue, children and adults should have a time schedule or restrict spending many hours on it. What's more, to have a habit of not eating while watching television is a potential clue to not overweight.
Another problem is that so many children and adults prefer eating junk foods such as hamburgers and fried foods. For instance, they want to save time because it is served quickly and cheaper than fresh foods. The solution is for the government to increase a tax on this kind of unhealthy foods.
The third cause of the problem is that many people are not that physically active. This reason includes: relying on cars instead of walking, not doing exercise at all, etc. Inactive people burn fewer calories than active people. This issue is especially around adults. The way forward could mobilize them to being more energetic and hardworking.
To sum up, the people who live in the 21st century are more inactive than the people who lived in a generation ago because of the rapid development in technology. This is a serious issue, and our world might be full of unhealthy children and adults. My view is that the main responsibility for solving the problem lies with the government and their citizens.
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- All over the world, socities are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affacts both children and adults. What are the reaons for this in obesity? How could it be tackled? 56
- All over the world, socities are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affacts both children and adults. What are the reaons for this in obesity? How could it be tackled? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obesity
...the situation turned into the opposite. obesity is facing around the world day by day. ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... or restrict spending many hours on it. Whats more, to have a habit of not eating whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, third, while, for instance, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7027027027 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43881193607 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54954954955 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8060550906 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.1818181818 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1363636364 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247954877408 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686441815951 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603171937594 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134902756017 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309489500828 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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