What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today. Choose one skill and use specific reasons and example to support your choice.
In order to be successful in new world, we need to learn different skills. In my point of view, the most important skill is communication. This essay will support this idea by providing some reasons in following paragraphs.
First of all, as human is social creature, spend most of his life in communication with others. By developing of civilization, and extending of cities, human faced with more complex relationship in compare with previous generation. In addition, these days because of the development of technology, access to communication application such as Telegram, What’s app, face-books, etc. get much easier than before. So virtual life was added to real life either which leads to relating with different people from all around the world. Therefore, we have to improve this skill as the most important skill which we need in our life According to the recent research which was done by Michigan communication institute (MCI), rate of communication application increased 90 percent each year during the last decade, and spend more time in touch with others.
Furthermore, we have a different kinds of communication in our daily life with our families’ members and colleague. As a father or mother of family, we have to know how to create proper communication with children and with our spouse. Since, friendly and suitable relationship is a key of having success family. In same way, we need to have good relationship with our co-workers and costumers. Specially, if we are working as a sale-person, we have to pay more attention to the way which we communicate with customers. For instance, five years ago, when I was working as florist in flowery shop, I noticed that creating communication is the key of prospect. Because, you have to attract customer with your speech and help him/her to believe you. Trust is the most important factor of trading, which is generated from communication.
In conclusion, I believe creating communication is the most important skill that we need to be successful in new world. I represented some reasons to support this idea.
- Why do you think some people are attract to dangerous sport or activities 88
- It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? 70
- university should give the same amount of money to their students sport activities as they give to their university libraries. do you agree or disagree? 86
- A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town city? 73
- The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. DO you agree or disagree with this statement? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'kind'?
Suggestion: kind
...hers. Furthermore, we have a different kinds of communication in our daily life with...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1746.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12023460411 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10321300319 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533724340176 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.791199284 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8947368421 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9473684211 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131170684121 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049979654171 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639758394097 0.0737576698707 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13945679756 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0965532813251 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Try to use less pronouns (like 'It, I, They, We, You...') as the subject of a sentence.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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