The following is a letter to the editor of the Glenville Gazette, a local newspaper.
"Over the past few years, the number of people who have purchased advance tickets for the Glenville Summer Concert series has declined, indicating lack of community support. Although the weather has been unpredictable in the past few years, this cannot be the reason for the decline in advance ticket purchases, because many people attended the concerts even in bad weather. Clearly, then, the reason for the decline is the choice of music, so the organizers of the concert should feature more modern music in the future and should be sure to include music composed by Richerts, whose recordings Glenville residents purchase more often than any other contemporary recordings. This strategy will undoubtedly increase advance ticket purchases and will increase attendance at the concerts."
The editor of the local newspaper states that the number of people purchased the advance tickets for the Gleniville Summer Concert series has declined and for this he assumed that it is indicating the lack of community support.And he justified his assumption by another assumption that is decline of choice of music from the people.And he suggests the organizers in the future purpose by including of modern music composed by Richerts which would undoubtedly ameliorate the purchase of advance tickets by Glenville residents.I find this argument absolutely illogical, defective, and irrational due to its inherent weakness.
Weaknesses in the Argument:
Firstly,the assumption he made by the editor was the reason for declining of the purchase of advance tickets for the Gleville Summer Concert series which indicates the lack of community support to concert.How can he infer this only based upon the decline in the advance tickets for concert? there must be proper evidence must be presented even for justifying his assumption.And there may be any other possible reason that could affect the purchase of advance tickets for this Summer concert series.
Secondly, his assumption about the change in the music taste of audience based on the previous years advance purchase of tickets, by justifying this he accounted for an additional statement that previous years people had attended to concert even in the bad weather conditions.So, he concluded that unpredictable weather may not be the reason for decline and only possible one is change of music taste of audience.This can be seemed to a irrational assumption because based on the decline in purchase to advance tickets alone can predict that taste of audiences for music had been changed. There might be a possible case of due to hefty schedules on working hours for employees, or may be the huge economic crisis faced by the people or many other.So, under the lack of any strong evidence to prove this assumption its is seemed to be a irrational assumption.
Thirdly,the suggestion given by the editor on the including of modern music by "Richets" in the concerts can undoubtedly improve the purchase of concert advance tickets than often any other contemporary recordings.On based on which criteria the editor has suggested this advice and how it would improve the purchase of tickets is not at all explained with proper adduce.So this seems to be an weak and illogical assumption.
As i have unravelled the defects in the argument, I strongly recommend the newspaper to withdraw its suggestion,conduct concrete research on the subject before it can provide any genuine advice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 28.8173652695 121% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 16.3942115768 165% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 2260.96107784 99% => OK
No of words: 424.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27122641509 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99831502313 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 204.123752495 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441037735849 0.468620217663 94% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 705.55239521 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.471057884232 212% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 60.0 22.8473053892 263% => Sentence length is too long
Sentence length SD: 162.84473637 57.8364921388 282% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 319.285714286 119.503703932 267% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.5714285714 23.324526521 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.70786347227 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.25449101796 400% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2514193912 0.218282227539 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130984462324 0.0743258471296 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856439872669 0.0701772020484 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124416515265 0.128457276422 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976302505339 0.0628817314937 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 14.3799401198 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.12 48.3550499002 4% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 14.6 7.1628742515 204% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.197005988 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.56 8.32208582834 127% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 12.3882235529 246% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.0 11.1389221557 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.