Any new technological development in the recent years is a boon or curse for the society in general.
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In the past 100 years, there have been many inventions such as antibiotics, airplanes and computers. What do you think is the most important of them? Why? Greatest invention in the last 100 years, medicine, science or technology?
Science and technology have greater influence in human life since their inception.
We are surrounding by machines for the intrinsic need to support our luxury life style. Science and technology brought revolution in human life. Despite all of developments and technological advancements still some of the analysts consider that it is curse for our society. The following paragraphs will explain inevitable reason, thus to deliver a plausible conclusion.
There are myriad of reason to support my stance, the most conspicuous and irrefutable is the invention of Computer. Computer made human life easy and faster. Not only can the computer work error free but also it has the ability to save the information for the period of unlimited time.
Moreover, Computers are playing a pivotal role in communication, calculation, navigation and automobile industry.
On the contrary, Firstly, Computer itself has no disadvantages and it disadvantages are depend on its usage. Secondly, staring for a long time at computer screen can be dangerous for eyes health.
In the light of above mentioned points, I pen down saying that Computer has a lot of advantages and that cannot be ignored and its disadvantages are too less to ignore as every garden has some weed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29353233831 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03528256901 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2784933815 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0851763368425 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314626618548 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339836069615 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387843934452 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313730442939 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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