Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1. give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
2. explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
3. describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I was informed by my friend that you intend to close a leisure centre to save your spending. I am writing this letter to suggest you to cancel your plan.
My friends and friends play sports and participate in a variety of leisure activities in this centre frequently. For instance, I prefer to play badminton in the sports centre and my friends are likely to go to the gym on weekends. Therefore, it is unquestionable that this sports centre plays an important role in relieving our pressure.
On the other hand, it is also crucial to the local residents. First of all, it is the only leisure place in this rural area. We must travel a long distance to the urbane area to do leisure activities if the centre closes. In addition, the centre is also considered as a indispensable part of the cultural legacy in this area, as it has been there for many years.
If you shut down the centre, it will result in a frenzy of our local people, as you action interfere with our lives. Furthermore, the image of local council will also be jeopardized and people will lose faith on you. In the light of such facts, you would be better to maintain the centre.
I hope that my suggestions will be of some assistance. If you require further information, you can contact me by email.
Your sincerely,
David Villa.
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Essay evaluation report
as a indispensable part of the cultural legacy
as an indispensable part of the cultural legacy
as you action interfere with our lives.
as your actions interfere with our lives.
as your action interferes with our lives.
flaws:
'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 239 250
No. of Characters: 1045 1200
No. of Different Words: 136 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.932 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.372 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.52 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 70 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.059 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.812 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.529 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.703 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.154 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60669456067 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6415760553 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569037656904 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.9 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0330188663 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289582330748 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891044326366 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608535860121 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139527712434 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0928677791685 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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