Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however believe school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are many factors which are effective by on our children to be a good person on society. Therefore, people are discussing some of the most important things in our life that are known as school and family. I would like to say something about this two things which had impact to develops of childrens.
As we all known, Childrens are open mind when they are 3-4 years old. In these age, they are starting to learning important thinks which are known culture and rules. I think, all of us have done unusual things under the society's eyes or neighbours too when we are child. So our families had given some reactions and punishments for show to true way. In order to be good member of society, family is build up our personality.
On the other hand, school is a another important factor in our life. We are spending a part of our life at the school then we reserves for friends and teachers. They are also teach to us how we can improve ourself.We are learning citizenship and cultures lessons which for use to rules in the society.
School also have some disadvanteges. Some friendships intived to bad habits therefore we must to know who s our friends.
We are amassing our culture while grow ups. There are something here for learning. Like friends,cities,worklife. But I'm sure family is except from these. Everytime, family accompanying us for devoloping our self.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ality. On the other hand, school is a another important factor in our life. W...
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Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reserve'
Suggestion: reserve
... part of our life at the school then we reserves for friends and teachers. They are also...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
...for friends and teachers. They are also teach to us how we can improve ourself.We are...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: We
... teach to us how we can improve ourself.We are learning citizenship and cultures ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w we can improve ourself.We are learning citizenship and cultures lessons which f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ip and cultures lessons which for use to rules in the society. School also h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich for use to rules in the society. School also have some disadvanteges. Som...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...hips intived to bad habits therefore we must to know who s our friends. We are amas...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cities
...omething here for learning. Like friends,cities,worklife. But Im sure family is except ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ning. Like friends,cities,worklife. But Im sure family is except from these. Every...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om these. Everytime, family accompanying us for devoloping our self.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76033057851 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83727566296 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595041322314 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1793507199 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7647058824 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2352941176 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165021247558 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527919578882 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04838723835 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092655071235 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048129951008 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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