Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution probems.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Nowadays, People are searching ways to solve environmental problems which are effecting our lifes.Therefore, one of the most discussed issues are pollution and traffic problems. Some people think, the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problem is increasing the price of petrol. I don't agree with this. Beacuse I belive, people should search another alternative solutions which will accompany to our whole life.
Firstly, there is growing traffic problem in our developing world. This problem is giving some damages about air pollution and using the time. One of the solution of this problem use public transportation. Like train,bus and metro.
Secondly, another problem is using fuel. In this times, scientists try to find some alternative fuels which arent harmful for environment. People are also using electric or hybrid cars. It shows that some people aware of their ecological responsibilities . All inviduals need to know these responsibilities. I think, the goverment also take control about this subject with good and imperessive advertisements instead of increasing the price of petrol.
Finally, we all know, there are many solutions in our world. Therefore solution of this problem seems like easily when we have better possibilities . The goverment must to find real solutions of problems without create a new problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1147.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51442307692 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01282594609 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4818516409 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4705882353 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2352941176 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117156865789 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416193386575 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838582327033 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741424887622 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775877300054 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.79 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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