The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer

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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer

The survey was carried out on adult education and the charts are result of collection data. A bar chart reveals several factor in matter of adult education. A pie char describes what people think about who should pay for the cost of adult education.

Overall, the two major reasons that people decide to study are they are interested in subjects and want to get more qualification. Their respective percentages are 40% and 38%. In another world, three another reasons for study like helpful in current job, to provide prospective for promotion and enjoying learning are most at the same level around 20%. The least important reason is to meet people as only 9% consider this aspect as a reason to study.

In term of cost, most people think that the cost of education should be paid by individuals and employers. Whereas, some think the cost should be share by taxpayers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun factor seems to be countable; consider using: 'several factors'.
Suggestion: several factors
...of collection data. A bar chart reveals several factor in matter of adult education. A pie cha...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d be paid by individuals and employers. Whereas, some think the cost should be share by...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shared'?
Suggestion: shared
... Whereas, some think the cost should be share by taxpayers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53849474208 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6655194843 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360809628769 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134554409538 0.0766984524023 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887263221297 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226206831074 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131166049995 0.0580467560999 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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