Leaders like John Kennedy and Martin Luther king have made important contributions to the people of the united states. Name another leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
When you see a country that is prosperous, it is not because it has the best natural resources or it is endowed with the best weather or location but because it is blessed with a good leader who has placed the development and progress of its country about his or her personal agenda.personally, I think that president Nelson Mandella is a very important leader for the following reasons.
First, Mandela is a man that sacrificed his life to make South Africa what it is today. He put his love for his country and believe in a country devoid of injustice and inequality above his love for himself an...
- Leaders like John Kennedy and Martin Luther king have made important contributions to the people of the united states. Name another leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice. 60
- Why do people travel , use examples and reasons to support your opinion. 75
- What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country,give illustrations and reasons to develop your opinion. 100
- Before an exam ,do you think it is better to prepare for a long time or only a few days.give examples and reasons to support. 80
- Which teacher has had the greatest influence on your life?why ?give reasons to support and develop your point? 95
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