Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and to protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom.
To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
In this world, there are many laws that control human behavior. It has two kinds for human to obey: rules from human and nature regulations. Most of rules is made from people such governments. The existence of rules is important to control citizens especially children, which is in growing step. At the same time, other people think that obligations block kids to develop.
Most of people who agree with the case many obligations stop children to improve think that most of rules in this world do not accord good effect. Adults build laws according to their opinion, and they do not want to listen children feeling. It produces rules, which do not suitable with kids. Then, people think that many obligations create children who always want to break the rules. It shows disadvantages of many laws that can create bad kids.
However, other people who support existence of rules produces good attitude for children that it can build discipline for kids. If children want to be success, they have to discipline, which must follow the rules. It will help them to be discipline person because it has power to command children. According to research about human behavior, 58 per cent people who like to respect with laws since children, they will be success when work. Due to many rules, children can understand which is nasty and prime for them.
In conclusion, many rules can produce good behavior for children. On the other hand, It also has bad effect. Parents and teacher have to know what is the best rules for children in controlling them.
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