Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in shopping centres. This has a negative effect on the youths and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People of young generation loved to roam in the shopping malls in their free time. But whether such activity is creating a negative effect on them and the society is a matter of debate. In my opinion, such concern raised seems to have both advantages and disadvantages. In this essay, I would like to present some of my views related to such concerns.
Firstly, young people are mostly fascinated by branded items. Only few of them bother about the design, colour and type of items they buy, the thing which captures most of their attention is " the tag mark that reflects the brand name". Young people of rich families spend their money in buying such luxurious items, this directly or indirectly affect young people who cannot afford to buy such items. This may sometimes make them feel insulted and some may also end up in disputes with their dear parents who cannot give them money to spend on such branded items. In addition to shopping malls, such areas are also installed with expensive restaurants which deal with junk foods, and young people are most likely to spend money in buying such foods. Thus, they not only become victim of wasting money but also get involve in a bad diet.
On the other hand, shopping mall can be recommended as a safe place where young people can meet their friends and roam safely. As such areas have all kinds of shops and restaurants, they are less likely to roam around in open streets which may be dangerous for them.
So can we agree completely that shopping mall is bad for young people to roam within? On one hand it seems young people are wasting their time and money in shopping malls, while on the other hand it can be said to be a safe place for them. Thus, I think young people should roam in shopping malls with their friends provided they keep a check on their money they spend and also utilise a good amount of time in their studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, may, so, thus, while, i think, in addition, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58651026393 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18657051885 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495601173021 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0862700482 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.266666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237550571551 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912569601218 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650594535318 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151943211129 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467588552305 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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