Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is generally argued that whether graduate students requitedly study subjects which will be utilitarian for their future career such as those pertaining science and technology or they can choose to study whatever they like. I personally agree with the former due to some following arguments.
On the one hand, it is imperative and beneficial when studying practical subjects such as science and technology. One reason is that global economy requires high-tech in production in order to ensure products to be endurable and in high quality. Consequently, many manufacturing factories are now downsizing their staffs since their machines are operated automatically by few skilled engineers and staffs. As a result, they attach special importance to recruiting people with considerable amount of knowledge of running or repairing modern appliances. Therefore, university students, especially whose major is related to science and technology will be entitled to secure a job after graduation. Besides, these jobs are usually well paid, which thereby ensure a high living standard to them.
On the other hand, letting students freely choose their subjects at school is considered a wise choice. Firstly, since each individual is in possession of different talents, it is more beneficial for them to nurture their talents since they receive valuable support from school. For example, those with inborn competent in playing musical instruments will have a chance to practice and advance their skills thanks to the caring and supportive instructors at the school. Secondly, making every student study a same subjects unquestionably creates tedious atmosphere in school in particular and in the society in general.
In conclusion, it seems to me that it is more advantageous to let graduate students choose to study their favorite subjects in lieu of making them study only practical ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50515463918 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92178278346 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611683848797 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9607981154 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277727870188 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893164223891 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865607376594 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177368731481 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812253268398 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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