Education is primarily a personal matter; it has little to do with school or college.

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Sentence: It includes making a person well aware of the world around him, learn how it works and at the same time be able to contribute towards the process of development by applying the skills he learnt while educating himself.
Error: learnt Suggestion: learn

Total:

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 417 350
No. of Characters: 1908 1500
No. of Different Words: 226 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.519 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.576 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.748 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 128 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 103 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.038 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.496 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.308 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.259 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.482 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5

hi..i just wanted to know if they also give importance to the content and opinion, because i think this essay didn't turn out to be that great, and still you say its on the top...or is it that i am being too critical of myself?