Some people believe that competitive sports both team and individual have no place in the school curriculum How far do you agree or disagree

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?

It is no secret, that physical education became irreplaceable part of school curriculum. But some people argue that competitive sports are needless. The first advantage of competitive sports is that they rally students. People find people with the same interests and schedule of the training. They can rest from the academic subjects and can spend time with each other doing exercises and practicing just going to the sports hall. As a result, they become a family and "all for one, one for all".

The second advantage is that it is an effective remedy of training the strong-willed qualities in e...

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