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GMAT Analysis essay - An ailing patient should have easy access to his or doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the ...
GMAT Analysis essay - An ailing patient should have easy access to his or doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the ...
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An ailing patient should have easy access to his or doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat the medical condition.
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Ailing patients want to check the doctor's record of treating similar conditions is unreasonable. If they don't believe in the doctor's ability they should not have chosen him. Very rarely, in an emergency situation only patients get a doctor who is unfamiliar to them. There are few objections to this unreasonable request like privacy o...
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Sentence: More over the cost of maintaining and providing that information will have to ultimately born by patients asking for it..
Description: An infinitival to is not usually followed by an adverb
Suggestion: Refer to to and ultimately
Sentence: Ninty-nine percent of the time patient get referrals from friends and family to choose the doctor.
Description: The fragment patient get referrals is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace get with verb, past tense or gets or patients
Sentence: Now a days you can check ratings of the doctors on internet sites.
Error: internet Suggestion: Internet
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Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 375 350
No. of Characters: 1830 1500
No. of Different Words: 193 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.401 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.88 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.563 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 135 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 104 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 40 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.75 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.706 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.302 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5