Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building?
Deciding on where to live could be one of the most important decision in people’s life. One may opt for living either in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building. However, in my opinion living in a traditional house is more advantageous than living in an apartment, because houses provide more space, usually have gardens and provide more privacy. In the following paragraph, I am going to explain each one of the reason mentioned above.
Firstly, it may not be a general rule, but usually houses are bigger than apartments. On the one hand, the more space we have the more comfortable we are, if we consider that a typical flat offers two or three small rooms,and traditional houses that usually were designed for bigger families, they actually provide extra room space, a bigger kitchen; therefore, we would be more comfortable than in an apartment. For example, I live in a regular three bedroom apartment, but taken into account that I have 3 kids, I am considering move to a house because I need more space and a backyard for my dog.
Secondly, normally houses have gardens. Even though, there are a bulk of houses without gardens, at least in my country, traditional houses have their gardens. However, I think that it is important to interact with nature, because it provides you the opportunity for releasing stress or simply relaxing. For instance, many people loves to cut the grass after a long day of work.
Thirdly, more privacy. On the one hand getting more privacy is an advantage but on the other hand if we get too much privacy it could be turned into loneliness and that may make people unsafe. However, living in an apartment assures too many neighbors therefore you will heard the sound of all of them. For example, one of my neighbors got an electric guitar, so he is driven me crazy with their so-called music.
To conclude, there is no a general recipe for choosing the place to live in, and of course that it depends on several factors, such as, age, income and lifestyle. However, considering my experience, I think that is better to live in a traditional house, because people will get more privacy, more space and beautiful gardens!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, at least, for example, for instance, i think, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 378.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78306878307 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68181428886 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502645502646 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.7523513281 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.352941176 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5294117647 5.45110844103 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213501200585 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755220562254 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834354987362 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12418056186 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669156267517 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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